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Published: 2009-03-16 04:13:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 222; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description My mind is full of locks.
These seals I’ve never seen or thought.
with every key i stumble to,
i'm guided more into myself.
each lock unlocked
and every shut door un-shut,
I find myself.  Born new, an epiphany
with red feathers ablaze,
the fire-hawk of my mental creation
bursts the flame of inner torture.
the vessels, mannequin men
walk their robotic strides.
These strides lead in only grey circles,
and again from thought,
I find myself
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Comments: 5

AveEnd [2009-03-27 20:08:04 +0000 UTC]

very nice work sslyd3r xD

sorry, its a little bit late O:
anyway, back to topic:
I like the way you'd written it. you'd captured the feelings pretty nice. ^^

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sslyd3r In reply to AveEnd [2009-07-09 02:59:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks its been awhile since i've been on how have you been?

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AveEnd In reply to sslyd3r [2009-07-09 16:06:02 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome :3

I'm pretty fine ... and I'm tired. Had a long day. I need some sleep XD

how about you?

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sslyd3r In reply to AveEnd [2009-07-10 03:43:11 +0000 UTC]

just trying to figure life out, but good

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mYsweetCHARADE [2009-03-18 19:16:26 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem

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