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Published: 2008-07-24 15:11:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 41; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description sometimes when creating brilliance
i'll hear a faint whispering  in the distance
the sound doesn't yet exist
and yet i still hear
then my hands tingle
and i can feel my  fingertips pressing down on the ivory rectangles of my future
each sensation brings in a new reality
i'm typing blind, and my ears  have a tingle
i follow the fates' destiny in hopes of compliment
life can here on show me sweetness
i think i may have plagiarized destiny
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sslyd3r - life as a thought
Comments: 8

xalways [2008-07-25 23:38:49 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, it's how I feel whenever I begin writing something. Kind of like earlier today when I wrote something down (still debating if I like it enough to post) but this displays a beautiful in my mind.

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sslyd3r In reply to xalways [2008-07-26 01:38:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks tori, i'm glad you got a chance to read some of what i wrote, it means alot that you like it, i was really nervous of joining deviant art because i wasn't sure if anyone would like what i wrote, so thanks (i've always been good at only saying a few words : ] )

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xalways In reply to sslyd3r [2008-07-26 01:46:05 +0000 UTC]

Well thats the point of putting stuff up, you can't be afraid of what people think and besides, by the looks of it everyone who has stopped by has liked it.

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sslyd3r In reply to xalways [2008-07-26 01:53:47 +0000 UTC]

just being very open tonight, i was just scared someone would either a. crush my confidence in writing

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xalways In reply to sslyd3r [2008-07-26 01:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Or B?

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sslyd3r In reply to xalways [2008-07-26 03:18:38 +0000 UTC]

or b. no one would say anything, and i'd be writing solely for you and sierra

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mYsweetCHARADE [2008-07-24 16:23:00 +0000 UTC]

So you wrote this partially blind and sleep deprived? Nice poem

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sslyd3r In reply to mYsweetCHARADE [2008-07-24 22:53:03 +0000 UTC]

i had 6 shots of espresso in me, i couldn't fall asleep but i was attempting, i really didn't want to get out of bed, but i did cuz i liked the thought too much

thanks by the way : ]

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