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Published: 2019-12-22 23:25:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Description some art of my oc Mina!! qwq
i'd love some critique on this piece!! ;0;<333

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Comments: 5

Raphaelion [2019-12-23 00:53:40 +0000 UTC]

this is super cute!! i love the fur texture

only thing i really have to critique is minor anatomy i guess, like this is a purely stylistic choice but usually the neck in cats is a little longer and more angled, the way you have it right now is kind of a 90 degree angle and maybe a little short? again tho its not required or anything lol xD

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staarpup In reply to Raphaelion [2019-12-30 21:00:52 +0000 UTC]

aAA thank you sm for the critique man!!! ;;W;;<333

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noctis-crow [2019-12-22 23:28:48 +0000 UTC]

SHE SO CUTE AAAAAAAAAAAA

soooo since u asked for critique ill try, even tho this is so cute theres very little to say about it in an improvement way aa

the way anatomy looks in your style is really round and eye pleasing which i love!! so dont change a thing about thatΒ 

the only 2 things i see is: one, the ear that's on the other side should only have the backside visible i think?? like the ear on the side facing us you can see the inside, but then the other one, you'd just see the back, though dont quote me on that thats just from memory

the other thing, are you shading using the color black?? while it doesn't look bad, what might make the piece pop is if you shaded with a dark, saturated color with the layer set to "multiply" !! to bring out the warm values :3

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staarpup In reply to noctis-crow [2019-12-30 21:00:36 +0000 UTC]

aAA thank you sm for the critique rEE!!! ;;W;;<333333

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Chaiiskies [2019-12-22 23:27:14 +0000 UTC]

this is a beautiful character

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