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Published: 2019-05-19 14:05:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 22786; Favourites: 468; Downloads: 224
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Work in progress for - not next month probably, but soon after that - on my Patreonwww.patreon.com/ Stahlberg
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I agree with fuzzy-moose... the censor square was perhaps unnecessary. You could've just made the apron tails a touch longer, if you wanted to censor it.
as to the art itself, the composition is excellent, i like the juxtaposition of the curves of the vase, echoing the womanly curves of their bodies, and the over-all use of lighting to produce a graduation that leads the eye across the page is great.. except.. you get to the left hand side and there's just nothing... it feels like the space to the left of the central figures is unused, save as a frame.
I dunno.. maybe your intent was to reduce the background to grey and white spacem in order to make the warm flesh tones pop out more... but while recognising that it *is* unfinished, it feels like it needs something more... just a tiny touch of colour maybe, like a red hair ribbon tying off the left-most figures bun, or something like that. Or maybe an out-of-focus glimpse of garden through the doorway, with some green or a gold toned sunbeam perhaps... although that I guess, risks distracting from the central tableau.
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Very nicely done, don't see the need for the ugly grey censor square though, DA does allow nudity as long as its not pornographic.
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