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StahrSkrayper07 β€” - The Voyage -

Published: 2009-04-06 17:52:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 771; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 25
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Description i personally really like this one. got a lot of help from the brother and the boyfriend, they seemed pleased. [the boyfriend wanted a scuba diving bunny being eaten by a shark, i told him no. o.o"]

enjoy!

credits:
~riviera2008 , ~darkrose42-stock , ~night-fate-stock , ~Tefee-stock

everything else was done by me ;]
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Comments: 13

MelGama [2009-04-06 19:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Your art is very impactant but something is missing in this art and I donΒ΄t know exactly what is - maybe a little more of feeling and suspense.
I like the colors that you used and also how the boat looks like so little in the middle of this tempestry.
The crossing between the sky and the sea is very well done.
The boat could be a little darker at this side because the bright in the sky is in the opposite side.
The use of textures in the sky gave it a poor appearence - like a noised photography.
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Cheers
Mel

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StahrSkrayper07 In reply to MelGama [2009-04-06 20:01:23 +0000 UTC]

i fixed the graininess...i think? i hope :] and i added a lil more darkness to the base of the boat and parts of the sail. tell me what you think?

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MelGama In reply to StahrSkrayper07 [2009-04-06 20:18:15 +0000 UTC]

ItΒ΄s better now but I donΒ΄t know if you used layers to work in Photoshop. If yes, you can use noise reduced in all sky many times. Try to put something like a light ray to the boat - I think it will make a big difference in the result

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StahrSkrayper07 In reply to MelGama [2009-04-06 19:44:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much for you words! i'm still trying to get the hang of this, so any kind of critique and tips i can get help!

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MelGama In reply to StahrSkrayper07 [2009-04-06 20:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Welcome hon

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Gypsy- [2009-05-18 01:22:41 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I really like this.

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Comacold [2009-05-16 20:28:51 +0000 UTC]

Looks great, so natural...

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Art-By-Mel-DA [2009-05-13 00:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely work!

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Faerie-StarV [2009-05-10 00:27:32 +0000 UTC]

What a beautiful scene!

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frenchfox [2009-04-07 05:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful scene

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StahrSkrayper07 In reply to frenchfox [2009-04-07 14:29:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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SolidCocoon [2009-04-06 19:09:38 +0000 UTC]

In-credible

The help paid off

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StahrSkrayper07 In reply to SolidCocoon [2009-04-07 14:29:12 +0000 UTC]

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