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Published: 2010-02-18 17:08:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1538; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 0
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I'm going to comment from the retouching point of view. I think there should be a little more contrast in the lines of the arms, because they now look like one shape. Well, that would be interesting too, it just depends on your view of this pic.
I would liquify the ankles to make them a little smaller . The highlight on the top of her hair could be a little darker. Be carefull to not remove all shadows at the ankles, as they will look weird and flat.
I like the styling. Cool pants
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thx for your comment, you cant imagine what i already did to this photo like liquifyed her whole body but your tips are good, when i find the time i will try them out
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I'm a high-end retoucher, I can imagine that and more 
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nope no retouching in the black skirt im sry no cookie for you
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I wish I had a pointer to show u
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I mean in the line between the upper part and the lower part ... maybe I should say the dress ... not sure how to call it ... the texture expands.
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i know what you mean but as i said thats no bad retouching its because of the small lines in the dress, i will upload it bigger for you so you can see that its because of those lines, give me a few minutes
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ok, now I see it better. The thing to make it look more straight is to darken those 2 lighter areas where the two pieces meet. There is one in the right and a bigger one in her left.
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oh ye i see the, i will darken those . thx
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I get the cookie for that 
I hope you didn't mind my comments
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*gives cockie*
no im glad that someone can give me good critiques and tips to improve my photos/retouching skills
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any lighter area will make it look expanded ..do u see those 2 lighter areas near the combining line of the blouse and skirt ? You should darken those to make it look flatten.
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i think without the leggings this would be killer because it'd be IN YOUR FACE pale legs, which would add some good lines to the shot. but i still really like this!!
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a good idea, but this leggings are designed for this outfit so i had no choice
and thx that you like it
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