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Published: 2007-07-16 04:32:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 61; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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StarYour star is what I was
Before there was anyone else
I'd look into your eyes
And to my surprise
I'd only see myself
~It's the hearts that change
The times they stay the same
There and back again
The tale of another heart on the mend~
Angel
It's what you used to call me
Before we learned it all the hard way
Back when love was somthing we could claim
Remember babe we had it made
Before you'd touched anyone else
I was your angel
You had me all to yourself
~It's the hearts that change
The times they stay the same
There and back again
The tale of another heart on the mend~
Oh baby
Yea I was you baby once
Before you gave up
Yea I was your star
Before there was anyone else
I was your angel
You had me to yourself
But you let me go
Left me cold
Your angel
Your star
Turns out
I was just another heart to discard
Comments: 3
wow... this is so amazing!!! so very amazing!! i hate that feeling of being left behind in the dust!! man this poem is really painful to read cause of the memories it brings back but i keep reading it over and over again!! really amazing!!
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God damn girl! That's great! Although... god i feel like such a bitch adding an "although" to this but you know me... The first part the pacing is a little off. Not much, in fact it doesn't even ruin or mess with anything, it was just an observation. This made me want to cry (the poem not the pacing...not that the pacing was off in anything, other than the first part... to me. Damn i'm rambling lol) Anyways... I love it. Btw.. we need to talk. I have GREAT news!!!
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