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Published: 2008-03-01 21:31:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1812; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 41
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Description I'm just asking, but has anyone here ever seen Alvin Earthworm's series, 'Super Mario Bros. Z'? I know Daisy's not in it, but I had started writing my own version... of course I chucked it because I can't write worth shi... well, you know. Daisy gets one of the Chaos Emeralds, but it starts messing with her head.

She has a recurring dream that she's the last one to carry a Chaos Emerald and Metal Sonic is after her. He kills her and transforms into his Super Form. Then the dream changes a little, Metal Sonic kills someone trying to save Daisy. Her true feelings are brought out when she realizes it's Luigi.

You see, I think ahead to much when I'm writing so I can't think of anything for where I am. I'm sure that if I was a good writer it would be a great story.
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Comments: 24

MarioStrikerMurphy [2013-05-03 02:14:30 +0000 UTC]

I can't understand also why the hell Daisy doesn't appears in Super Mario Bros. Z, but I had better ideas for her in this saga...

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daisyfan116 [2012-01-13 01:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Can I copy this?

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ThatNintendoFangirl [2011-08-10 23:01:43 +0000 UTC]

That...sounds actually really interesting...like an epic crossover. 8D
PLEEEEASEEE WRITE IT. BELIEVE IN YOURSELF.

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SilverDragon234 [2010-03-16 18:37:58 +0000 UTC]

The look on her face is of fear.

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static-the-hedghog [2009-03-01 04:02:50 +0000 UTC]

poor dasiy

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Starforce69 In reply to static-the-hedghog [2009-03-01 17:09:58 +0000 UTC]

You can say that again.

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static-the-hedghog In reply to Starforce69 [2009-03-02 03:29:26 +0000 UTC]

i like dasiy

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IceCreamMen4 [2009-02-21 06:55:07 +0000 UTC]

If you think ur a bad writer look at the story i made with my own OC!!

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Starforce69 In reply to IceCreamMen4 [2009-02-21 19:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Hehe... trust me when I say that I'm bad. And thanks for the fave!

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IceCreamMen4 In reply to Starforce69 [2009-02-22 02:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Ok i trust yah.... Cuz i get good grades on the writing test in school! And ur welcome!

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Starforce69 In reply to IceCreamMen4 [2009-02-22 03:11:37 +0000 UTC]

When it comes to school essays (Other then in History), I do fine. But when it comes to writing stories, which I don't do for school, I suck.

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IceCreamMen4 In reply to Starforce69 [2009-02-22 03:14:58 +0000 UTC]

When i have a topic thats exciting i could do an awsome job!! But lame school deosn't give me any!!

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Markiehh [2009-02-19 19:19:54 +0000 UTC]

hey i really like this pic do u mind if i color it in? dont worry i'll give u proper credit

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Starforce69 In reply to Markiehh [2009-02-19 20:06:05 +0000 UTC]

this is new! sure, be my guest. i'm glad you like it so much.

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Markiehh In reply to Starforce69 [2009-02-19 23:13:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Siegfried129 [2008-10-23 20:40:18 +0000 UTC]

love it

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Starforce69 In reply to Siegfried129 [2008-10-23 20:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you times two!

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Mega246 [2008-10-04 15:32:34 +0000 UTC]

I like this pic, The look of Anxiety on her face is expressed well.

I kind of think this could happen next as an add-on to you version of events.

-Luigi gave his life to stop Mecha Sonic from hurting Daisy and getting the last chaos emerald, Just as she had seen in her dreams.

Because of this Daisy uses the emerald and trys to avenge Luigi's death and attacked Mecha Sonic.

Though she put up a better fight that he had expected, she is defeted by Mecha Sonic, even so Daisy still refused to give up the emerald she still held and Mecha Sonic prepares to finish her off and take it from her.

Luigi, who lay dying during the battle could feel the emeralds power within Daisy and the same recurring visions she had of Daisy's death at Mecha Sonic's hand and of his ascension, he could hear himself calling out to Daisy and her calling out his, then cut out by Mecha Sonic's laugh, gunfire and Daisy's dying scream, he heard himself shouting Daisy's name and then silence.

Then something happens to Luigi, something from deep within himself awoke because of the vision and responded to the emerald Daisy held, Then the location they were in was was engulfed by a greenish white light that burst from luigi, throwing Mecha Sonic away from Daisy and himself.

When Mecha Sonic recovered from the blast he looked back to see where the powerfull light had come from, he was met with a powerfull glare from demonic looking Luigi who stood between Daisy and The 7th emerald and himself.-

Its just an idea i Thought of because of your picture and of what happening in SMBZ. It would be good if this attualy happenes but i doubt it will ....sigh....

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Starforce69 In reply to Mega246 [2008-10-04 16:44:52 +0000 UTC]

You see... this is exactly why I could never be a writer. I love it!

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Mega246 In reply to Starforce69 [2008-10-04 19:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Really?! Thank you

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Starforce69 In reply to Mega246 [2008-10-05 00:02:23 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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saiiko [2008-04-02 05:07:07 +0000 UTC]

Wait, I've seen this pic before! So you drew it. That's a good edit. I like the jewel, I mean Chaos Emerald. Makes me wonder why nobody comments when they just and run. <.<;

Anyway, regarding your take on "not wanting to color," I've been there too. Wouldn't color a single pic...until I learned quicker ways of coloring. (Illustrator + PS) Your drawings are clean and have pencil shadings, so personally speaking, I'm sure they'll look great in color.

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Starforce69 In reply to saiiko [2008-04-02 23:39:45 +0000 UTC]

Mhm, it's her pic for "Mario Hoops: 3 on 3". A fun game, if you enjoy an extremely easy round of Basketball goodness.
To be perfectly honest, I used to color more when I was younger, but then I started shading and stopped coloring pics all together. Sounds stupid but it's true.

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saiiko In reply to Starforce69 [2008-04-03 00:13:05 +0000 UTC]

that's why I wrote "edit" yeah, the game is fun, until you play against the FF cast on hard and have to win by 200 pts.. -.-;

It's not stupid. ;] I did the same when I was a kid. Coloring was fun, kinda still is now.

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