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Published: 2009-07-26 16:46:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 802; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Description AAARRGGGHHH MY PAINTING IS ALOT MORE YELLOW AND NOT SO GREEEEEENNN!!!!!!! hmmph

I painted this to give to my grandfather for his birthday but he ended up canceling on us so we couldn't go see him...I dunno if or when I'll ever see him again, I miss him so much.

That is supposed to be a river but tell me does it look like a river or a path to you? Both of my parents thought it looked like a path but my sisters say they see a river.

My first ever painting of scenery, the only ever nature scene I've done before is a beach with a bottle and that painting was old and got torn apart a while ago from being left out on the floor ( *sniff sniff*)

Acryclics on...whatever acrylic paper my mom got for me, nothing fancy.

Interesting fact, I didn't use any white when making this painting, and I used my finger alot for blending on the trees. XD took me about a day to complete. critiques and comments are welcome!

Painted: 7/16/09
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Comments: 41

Shebelina [2009-09-14 20:27:30 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was a path, I think it was because of the way it winds around. This is the best painting of yours I've seen so far, it's beautiful. The colours are fantastic

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stargate4ever23 In reply to Shebelina [2009-09-15 00:34:13 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, hehehehe. Thank you so much! Got any more encouragement for me? Because I'm working on another painting but can't seem to get the inspiration to finish it. :/

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Shebelina In reply to stargate4ever23 [2009-09-16 19:46:56 +0000 UTC]

I can be a one woman cheerleading team *more painting, more painting woo hoo!*

I can't wait to see it.

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stargate4ever23 In reply to Shebelina [2009-09-17 14:04:40 +0000 UTC]

LOL hehehee I will try to make time to finish it. ^.^

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Shebelina In reply to stargate4ever23 [2009-09-17 14:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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stargate4ever23 In reply to Shebelina [2009-09-17 14:34:05 +0000 UTC]

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KatiesPhotography [2009-08-26 02:08:26 +0000 UTC]

This is featured in my latest journal, I hope you don't mind!

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stargate4ever23 In reply to KatiesPhotography [2009-08-27 01:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you SOO much!

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RejoiceDanceSing [2009-08-23 01:50:07 +0000 UTC]

whoa, cool!!

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stargate4ever23 In reply to RejoiceDanceSing [2009-08-23 02:18:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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Cristian-M [2009-08-03 14:23:40 +0000 UTC]

You are talented!

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stargate4ever23 In reply to Cristian-M [2009-08-03 16:56:28 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW ehehehe thanks so much!

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Piombo [2009-07-31 14:57:52 +0000 UTC]

I see a path probably also because of how it ends,think about it,if you had done somenthing like a little lake at the end of the river (top part of the painting)it could have been more clear,like this there can only be a waterfall at the end of the river.BUT....I love it anyway,it's gorgeous,the way you painted all the bushes is beautiful,I really think you did a great job with this one and I think you should have paid the same attention you gave to the bushes to the top of the trees.I think your grandad will love it

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stargate4ever23 In reply to Piombo [2009-07-31 15:41:58 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't give it to me grandad in the end cuz he canceled on us. I see your point, I shoulda tried to be a little more creative, I didn't go outta my way cuz I hadn't a reference. I should added more attention to the top of the trees but I decided to add that at the last minute. *shrug* i'll remember all that next time I paint tho. THANKS!

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artweller24 [2009-07-29 20:31:35 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful and cool work

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stargate4ever23 In reply to artweller24 [2009-07-30 12:28:31 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you!

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artweller24 In reply to stargate4ever23 [2009-07-30 12:33:28 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome

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stargate4ever23 In reply to artweller24 [2009-07-30 12:36:58 +0000 UTC]

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artweller24 In reply to stargate4ever23 [2009-07-30 14:07:03 +0000 UTC]

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BuffyPirate [2009-07-28 18:00:33 +0000 UTC]

I love the look of the bushes!! I think it looks like a path personally, cuz of both the color and the angle looks to steep for a river.

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stargate4ever23 In reply to BuffyPirate [2009-07-28 21:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Oohh, I see your point, your right.

thanks!

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celticabria [2009-07-28 10:18:39 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!! I've never seen you with acrylics but you're really talented! OMG!! I really love your art! I wanna be your fan!

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stargate4ever23 In reply to celticabria [2009-07-28 15:33:52 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW! thank you soo much! these are really my first real good drawing with acrylics.

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fromthesoul18 [2009-07-27 15:10:40 +0000 UTC]

the bushes are really pretty =]

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stargate4ever23 In reply to fromthesoul18 [2009-07-27 15:45:42 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you!

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dibbuns [2009-07-27 10:17:28 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful :3 The soft brush marks on the bushes have a lovely feel to them, and there is so much depth to every part, not just in the perspective overall but in each individual element of the painting. The colour choice is fantastic.

I did think it was a path at first, but that doesn't detract from the painting at all... I think it actually adds to it as you feel drawn along "the path" as if you could enter this almost mystical scene.

The reason why it looks more pathlike is that the ripples on the waters surface don't flow with the direction the water would be going in - along the course of the river, not always from side to side as you have them. Maybe the inclusion of something breaking the water's surface would also add to this, with the ripples flowing around it. I would still say though, it doesn't need changing, it's beautiful as it is! Just a few things to think about if you do something like this again :3

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stargate4ever23 In reply to dibbuns [2009-07-27 15:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Well I didn't have a reference for the water, you should seen it when I first started actually i'm okay with it being either a river or a path.

but your comment has made my day sso much...thank you, it means alot to me what you've said and how much you like it.

For that I shall paint something for you. XD be on the lookout.

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dibbuns In reply to stargate4ever23 [2009-08-16 11:27:02 +0000 UTC]

:3 I'm glad it made you happy! Ooo something for me?! I shall keep an eye out. But really, I was just telling the truth so it's you I should be thanking for showing me a piece of art that made me go "ooo!"

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stargate4ever23 In reply to dibbuns [2009-08-16 17:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks again!!! LOL Painting has slowed down a bit for me because i'm swamped with drawings but I shall get around to it someday. XD

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Arya-DragonQueen [2009-07-27 09:25:54 +0000 UTC]

I first thought it was a path when i saw the thumb of the deviation in my inbox. But when I look at the large version carefully, I can see that those tree reflections in the water really look more like reflections than shadows - so it does look like a river to me. The fact that the reflection is a bit distorted by the waves makes things clear lol. I definitely love the colors! It looks like a nice peaceful sunset to me. And now I can call you a liar for telling me that you're bad at drawing scenery lol

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stargate4ever23 In reply to Arya-DragonQueen [2009-07-27 14:48:25 +0000 UTC]

LOL Awww, I don't mean to be a liar, I just never like my own works anyway. LOL

yyyaaaay a river! most have said they see a river, thank you so much sis!

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Arya-DragonQueen In reply to stargate4ever23 [2009-07-27 19:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Nah I know... your own critique is always the toughest one lol

It's a river!!!!!!

you're welcome

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stargate4ever23 In reply to Arya-DragonQueen [2009-07-27 22:49:54 +0000 UTC]

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Arya-DragonQueen In reply to Arya-DragonQueen [2009-07-27 09:26:31 +0000 UTC]

oh, and the bushes look so realistic. i love how you used the colors there

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sn4pdr4g0n [2009-07-26 18:59:10 +0000 UTC]

I see a path around the bottom, but then it ends up looking like a river when I scroll up

This is nice

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stargate4ever23 In reply to sn4pdr4g0n [2009-07-27 14:45:36 +0000 UTC]

LOL hahahaha okay thanks. XD

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FelesTacita [2009-07-26 17:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow that's beautiful! D8 I LOVE LOVE LOVE the choice of colors and they work together so nicely.

I see a river. xD

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stargate4ever23 In reply to FelesTacita [2009-07-27 14:45:20 +0000 UTC]

Awwww thank you sooo much! I'm happy you like it and I'm happy you see a river. XD

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WinterCabin [2009-07-26 16:49:18 +0000 UTC]

I think it's beautiful! I see a river!

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stargate4ever23 In reply to WinterCabin [2009-07-26 17:03:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh yay! Thanks .

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WinterCabin In reply to stargate4ever23 [2009-07-26 17:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! hehe!

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