Comments: 7
misellapuella [2018-09-24 17:41:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow!! It's lovely seeing this compared with the sketchy version! I love all of the different colours, makes me think of a peacock sort of, and the flowyness of the hair!
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Pegaite [2018-09-24 17:03:33 +0000 UTC]
I like the values in this! It would definitely look good in black and white - it's not dependent on the color contrast, which is good^^
You have two light sources what I can see; from behind and one angled above/front. It's always good to have 2 light sources But with the light coming from behind, maybe it would look better if you paint where the light hit the hair or like a glow around the hair. Looking at photos, like this for example:
(very random I found on google hehe)
...it would look more attractive to the eye And the character will pop out more.
The colors are really good in my opinion so I have no comment on that^u^ Just go crazy with colors and add as many possible haha. Like, choosing one or two colors to have as the main theme and then less saturated ones for the shadows and the rest.
Composition is very good in this one. Having a circle in a center componed picture always works and it puts the attention on the character I like how the shoulder move, it looks very dynamic Not to mention the flow of the hair which makes it look more interesting and alive! If a painting looks dead, then adding wind will definitely bring it to life
One thing I have noticed with your art, in both traditional and digital, is that you tend to draw the same faces (shapes, noses, eyes). It's called the "same face syndrome" and yes, it's an actual thing XD Many artists suffer from it... I think drawing lots of different face studies can cure that. Maybe challenge yourself and draw a male every now and then (shit, I need to do this as well XD).
Your art is really good and I think you have a lot of potential! I hope my little critique helped >.< Even tho it's Monday and I'm really tired I hope some of it made sense haha XD
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Pegaite In reply to Starina-Lenore [2018-09-26 17:08:08 +0000 UTC]
I often use pinterest, but you need to search around for a while to get to those good photos that aren't too "photoshopped" and "ideal" faces and stuff. I've heard it's good to draw old people cuz they have so much wrinkles XD But idk. It's kinda fun cuz it's not supposed to look pretty so it's pretty easy to do a good sketch lol
I also use quickposes , they have a library where u can find lots of photos that are free to draw + many variations of faces and angles + much more. I do think you need to make an account to be able to use the library, I don't remember XD
I'm glad to be of help
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