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Published: 2013-06-10 04:57:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 787; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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omg the pose is adorable and the coloring is great and omg omg omg
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oh my gosh thankyou
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Critique
Oh this is very cute. You did a very nice job. There are a few things though I'm going to point out.
The shoulder on the left is just not there. Even though the arm is straight there should be some kind of shoulder. It looks like the arm is going straight into the neck. Her neck is also too small even for an anime style. It doesn't look like it would be able to support her head. The legs look pretty good but there isn't enough curve on the lower leg. Since she has larger hips on top she would have some more curve down below as well. The balance seems a little off because her calves are so small. Her hands are amazing though!!! Super pretty and sweet! You did a great job on them. And the face is well done too. Very cute.
The coloring may need some work but if you don't want me to help you with that I understand.
I hope the critique helped. I saw that you wanted one since this was in the critique geek group.
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Thank you so much!Β
If you could help me with coloring that would be amazing since I don't really know what I'm doing ;-;
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Okay sure!
One thing this is just too flat. When you are done coloring you want to be able to hide the line-art and the drawing to have shape. (Of course unless you are going for a simple style.) I'm not sure what program you are using but I'm going to give you some tutorials just to help you see how to build up the colors. You don't have to look at all of them just pick a few that look interesting. Then give them a try. Don't be afraid to experiment. Once your done coloring feel free to send me the piece if you want another critique. And don't get impatient. Coloring takes a long time. If you like you need a break just set it down and walk away for a while. Then come back fresh. Also if you are just feeling done go look up some good speed paints on youtube to get you excited. I can send you some of those if you want.
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ENJOY! And I'm happy to help if you have any questions.Β
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Wow, thank you so much
these are really helpful <3
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You're welcome! Let me know how they work out for you okay!
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