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starrz — Color Blind
Published: 2003-01-16 02:00:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 118; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description Darkness is my friend
Welcomes me to the end
Color frustrates me so
Trapped beneath your rainbow

Cover me with the night sky
Comfort me with a lie
Pick me up on my feet
Hide the scares underneath

Show me pain you have had
Tell me what makes you mad
I\'ll pour into your mind Lust
Then I’ll have your trust

I use the ultimate disguise
Steals the vision from your eyes
I wish you could see from your mind
Cause your heart leaves you so blind

If I could think of a way
Then I’d make you pay
For stealing the colors from my life
My blood still clings to your knife
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Comments: 3

d-mon [2003-02-16 02:47:55 +0000 UTC]

i'll agree with chaos on this one, i'm not really a fan of rhyme either, but the imagery and content is great

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xien55 [2003-02-12 10:53:16 +0000 UTC]

I just finished running into your deviations, and I must say that I absolutely am caught off guard. I love the you're writing style, and enjoyed going through everything you had done. It is all simply beautiful.

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unbrokenchaos [2003-01-16 02:26:35 +0000 UTC]

i still thinki.. it has too much rhyme

but thats mostly cause I dont reeallllly enjoy that rhyme scheme.

but it has a cool subject.

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