starrz [2003-03-01 07:53:26 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I do photography...school has a dark room...:-D
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hammclov [2003-03-01 02:31:43 +0000 UTC]
Lostwolf submitted a picture very like yours, probably about ten minutes before you did. 'Cept in his the sky was much darker and no picture of himself. I liked his a little more because it was more understated. On the otherhand, a beautiful girl adds a lot to any photograph. Three things. I like your print being lighter because it accentuates the skeletel quality of the trees. However, the writing on the picture is tacky. I do shit like that all the time, and get reprimanded for it. The picture ought to speak for itself. Lastly, the photo is nice, but I think it would be nicer if you were looking at the lense. Night is a funny thing, frightening often, and comforting often as well. There is nothing more disturbing than being looked in the eye. Comforting and frightinening. My hands, are hurting, time to stop.
cheers,
jeremy~hammclov
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hsupernormal [2003-03-01 02:28:15 +0000 UTC]
You had a pretty good idea here and you did a pretty good job with it. I have one small suggestion and that is to make the words(I love the phrase by the way) seem more natural. I usually blur them so that they don't come across as so hard-edged, especially in a picture like this. Also, a font color that doesn't come out so hard against the rest of the picture might help as well. Otherwise, beautiful job.
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