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Starwarrior4ever — Jack Frost Portrait
Published: 2013-08-30 22:36:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1270; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Hadn't drawn Jack Frost in a while, and since I'm going to be doing a comic of the big four pretty soon, I figured "why not"
Also did this with my friend Luna on that join.me thingie-ma-bob. She used it as reference and should be uploading a pic similar to this pretty soon as well It was pretty fun. ^,^Hope you guys like it!
and I might even sell this as a print, I"m so happy with this thing!
From start to finish... I don't know how long this took, maybe an hour and a half? O.o I didn't keep track of the time.
--edit--
Okay so pointed out a few mistakes, so I went back and fixed them. I made the right eye smaller and closer to the other eye—I hope this turned out better and more atomically correct!
If anyone else notices something wrong with my work, please tell me!
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Oh well,
* Beautiful eyes, as always.
* Good job with the hoodie - it looks smooth and cool. I especially love the way you use the "little sparkles" brush.
* Nice choice of colors!
* I think the hair can be better!
* The neck should be lean to the other side!
* His ears are a little bit large.
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Hmm okay. Yeah, i wasn't as satisfied with the hair either, i'll be sure to make sure I don't do that in the future.... And the neck? Okay, I think i see what you mean by needing to lean on the other side... (And but i like the big ears... XD kidding)
Thanks for pointing these things out!
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cant wait to see how luna went
anyway this is incredible Star
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Ammmggggg iz finished! oAo
and yesh, i will be uploading my pic soon
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It's awesome! I love it!
though something about the eyes is bugging me
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Really? How is it bugging you? (I think I see what you mean.....)
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the right eye seems too large (not by much) and they seem to be too far set apart
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Hmm okay... Yeah, now that you mention that I can totally see that. 
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You're very welcome! I wasn't sure if you wanted an outside perspective of the piece but I'm glad I could help
It's very human to make mistakes, I think I actually do the same quite often, to fix it is to be aware of the common mistakes that you make and catch them before anyone else can.Then again other people can pick up on things you may not necessarily see and that's what constructive criticism is for
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Yes, exactly! I find myself needing constructive criticism much more lately. I mean, I like all the compliments, but I need someone to tell me what I'm doing wrong. Lots of times I'm like "This isn't quite right... but I don't know what". Also I notice it's always the eyes that I get wrong. :/ Something tells me I need to do something about that...
Again, thanks for your help!
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I think people don't want to give it out afraid you might take offense, and there seem to be a great deal of people on here who don't like people poking at their art (I understand why some people don't want it) and just assume the rest of us don't want it either.
I like good feedback too, but its so seldom that it ever happens (well I've only been on here for a week so I can't say seldom yet X)
I'm not sure if it'll help you but it helps me. Try flipping the picture, most often times you'll be able to see mistakes this way and you can flip the picture back to see if your correction looks better or worse, I do it all the time and it helps me set the eyes right on the face, as well as the balance of the body
Haha you're very welcome I'm glad I could be of some service. and If I happen to run into some of your work again while browsing newest stuff I'll be sure to leave some more constructive criticism and possibly tips
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Thanks for the tip!
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You're welcome
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Ok it should be fixed now
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nah that's alright,
took a look at it and it looks MUCH better and balanced, fixing the eye definitely took care of things
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Again you're very welcome and I'm glad that I could be of some service ^_^
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