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Starwarrior4ever — The Girl on Fire
Published: 2014-01-31 16:56:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 4231; Favourites: 131; Downloads: 0
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So you know the whole "Katniss is the girl on fire"... well, this is MY version of "The Girl on Fire"
(Notice it has nothing to do with Katniss or the Hunger Games. XDD)
This was sort of inspired by Elsa from Frozen, and Merida from Brave, but in the end I ended up making it my own thing 
Hope you guys like it! ^o^ And as always, Constructive Criticism would be very appreciated!
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"i was a girl on fire before it was mainstream..."
now seriously, this is very good
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Well, when I looked at it I thought of Merida and Elsa, so it's not that much of your own thing
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I don't see Merida as the type to sing.
Which is weird because she's a Disney Princess. Aren't they all supposed to sing?
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Uh, hehe, well this isn't technically supposed to be Merida; it was just inspired by her and Elsa. (People got that confused, apparently... I probably didn't do that great of a job explaining it in the description).
True, but technically Merida is a PIXAR princess; Disney just owns the copyright. (The way I see it she's Disney by name, not blood XP) That's why she doesn't sing, in my mind.
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I know I was just pointing that out.
And that is true. I'll need to point that out in a future chapter of my Rise of the Brave Tangled Dragons story.
Speaking of which, have you read it yet?
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OH, no i haven't, sorry Ive had so much on my plate recently i haven't had time to read much of anything 
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It's no big deal. I just want some opinions on my writing.
Here's the prologue.
rasenganlucario.deviantart.com…
Please read and leave a comment on it.
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Yeah she's smokin...or she's so good she's on fire! Before you ask, yes making bad puns gives me such pleasure
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Move over Katniss, the NEW girl on fire is here.
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I highly doubt that would woorrk.... XD
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What's with elsa's face?
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that is why you never pause a disney movie
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wow, when I first saw it I thought "did she do katness?" than I saw the hair and I thought "Merida!" then I read what you said and I was like "ooooohhhhh" I don't see a hint of elsa in there though :/ but that is probably just me.
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I made it more like Elsa with her stance, and just a hint with her dress.
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oh I see it now. I noticed something odd or different about her pose and dress, like they looked familiar, and I didn't figure out what it was. And then you said part was from frozen I was like, what? Now I see it!
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It's beautiful! It kinda reminds me of Azula except... You know... Not insane.
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No problem! Can't wait for the next page of your comic!
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Only if you could favorite comments....
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seemingly you can, but i didn't found the button to fav comments
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Haha, if only! But thanks!
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