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Steel-Dust — Blade Gundam - Final sketch
Published: 2013-11-20 03:22:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1491; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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Hello, i have been working on some stuff, and i start to rework my gundam proyect, i start with the basic and re-doing few mobile suits. I started with Blade because i like it a bit more than the others, he...well here is the original sketch scontent-b-lax.xx.fbcdn.net/hp… . And i would really like to hear opinions
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gotta fix up ur proportions a lil bit. i like the design its great! but it cud use some touchups. lets see:
- the arm join is way too thin to support the movement of that arm. (the thing that at the elbow connecting the two arm pieces)
- the bottom half of the leg (the shin part) needs to be lengthened its way too short to support movement
- the feet could be fortified. it doesnt have enough armor/support for a rugged battle. the feet could break easily under strain
just a helpful critique i mean nothing negative by it
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I see, and i agree glad is just a sketch :3. Thank you for the constructive feedback!
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What about now? fbcdn-sphotos-f-a.akamaihd.net…
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mmmm the feet fortifications are very nice well done ^^ the arm parts however are thicker yes but dont they still look brittle? kimchijung.deviantart.com/art/… here something i found in my art. the arm joint design is quite similar to urs but see how the connecting part at the elbow connect the arm much more sturdily?
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i know i know but the paper can´t support me >_<
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