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Stef192k — Tears
Published: 2014-07-03 10:09:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 286; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Mini comic.when the rain falls you felt that you want tears to come out.
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I think that your panel layout in this page is really wonderfully done. It's simple and shows a basic narrative, but that simplicity carries a specific emotion with the page. One of melancholy.
You have a great use of contrast and texture, and my suggestion to take this to the next level would be to work on line weight. It's where one line becomes thicker or thinner in parts of shadow or highlight, respectively. It may be nice to clean up the panel borders a bit more too, or to make them rougher so it looks even more intentional.
It's always nice to see sequential art, as I'm a sequential artist myself. Keep up the great work!
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