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daydreamingninja007 [2016-08-05 18:42:51 +0000 UTC]
Of course he wants me for symmetry
Love it by the way
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DeadstarRose [2016-07-01 22:12:42 +0000 UTC]
When it said 'Soul gave him a look that said ohmygodyoursostupid' I couldn't stop laughing. This is a beautiful piece of writing.
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Boye21 [2016-06-05 16:57:56 +0000 UTC]
I love how you took some text from the song ''perfect two''!!! <3
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MiraChan145 [2016-05-01 20:06:10 +0000 UTC]
Whooooa that got steamy. Go Kid. Ha.
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0Papermoon [2016-02-17 16:24:53 +0000 UTC]
OML THIS IS SO AMAZING must read more
*fabs away*
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kawaiiCuppyCakeDesu [2016-01-07 03:28:49 +0000 UTC]
*Whale Noises* nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaa mmmmmmmmmooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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SwiftShade13 [2015-12-07 19:20:18 +0000 UTC]
0_0.........TAKE ME AWAY SENPAI!!!!! XD
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tattoofangirl [2015-11-28 05:40:52 +0000 UTC]
I freakin love this SO much!!
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TheEmeraldOfVenus [2015-09-02 04:06:57 +0000 UTC]
PLZ WRITE MORE THIS IS SO AMAZING
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TheRainbowMoonshine [2015-07-10 14:04:57 +0000 UTC]
I think it was some really good writing, and you should write more! to have some constructive criticism I believe that certain situations *cough cough* broke the romance just a bit. You must keep in mind that lust and love are not the same thing and I believe the cast in soul eater are around 14 -15 yrs old. Also at the end I felt it got a bit repetitive. While it was sweet and such I felt that it went a bit over the top. Still very well written, and I look forward to seeing more of your work! Perhaps a Ed x Reader? (FMA) :3
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Luna134 [2015-06-18 02:30:18 +0000 UTC]
Im jealous. In real life I'm an A cup. XC
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Yuuunnnnooo [2015-06-17 20:16:33 +0000 UTC]
If Kid took my shirt Off i would be like Then Kiss him
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AngllannaKurayami [2015-05-31 21:44:33 +0000 UTC]
Angel: Hey, Connor, come look!
Connor: Well then.
Angel: Yup.
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Yesimthatcountess [2015-02-12 01:01:47 +0000 UTC]
I would read the lemon for this
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a-sound-heart [2015-01-24 16:54:52 +0000 UTC]
“You just don’t get it, Kid!” you feel tears in your eyes and you want to stop yourself, but you can’t. “You complete me. You’re the shoes and I’m the laces, you’re the apple to my pie, you’re the peanut butter to my jelly, you straw to my berry, and dammit, you’re every single butterfly that I feel in my belly. It’s hurt me to ignore you Kid, because I just don’t know how I could live without you. You complete me. You’re the pencil and I’m the paper, and I don’t care how cold to me you are because I all I want is to be with you. But at the same time,” you pause to take a breath, “but at the same time, I can’t be with you when you tear me apart like you do. You don’t care, and you just go around not caring and it hurts so much. I want you to be my prince. I want you to be my knight in shining armor. I want you to save my when I’m a damsel. I want you to abduct me, like I matter.
“I want you to be there for me, and want me, and need me, and love me, because dammit, Kid. You’re just so perfect and I love you. I love you so much it’s painful. I love you for your OCD and your freakiness. I love you for your obsession with symmetry. I love you for your sensitivity. I love you for your reactions. I love ever bit of you, even down to those three stripes on the side of your head. I don’t care if you’re a little asymmetrical. I don’t care because I love you too much. You’re unique and amazing and beautiful and perfect and kind and smart. I love you so much and it hurts because you don’t love me too.”
Omg crying! Loved this part so much! Eeeee! Thanks for writing this
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Maddiefriend2 [2014-12-30 23:31:01 +0000 UTC]
Your the apple to my pie your the straw to my berry your the smoke to my high and your the one I wanna marry cause your the one for me for me and I'm the one for you for you it takes the both of us of us and we're the perfect 2
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Maddiefriend2 In reply to Terrencethetitan [2015-04-11 02:27:31 +0000 UTC]
Thank you all so much! I had always hoped to be this good of a singer!
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Sylvia130 [2014-12-27 01:25:39 +0000 UTC]
Awesome XD
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KidLizPerfection [2014-08-29 17:56:16 +0000 UTC]
You just have to make more! I mean I ship Liz and kid but kids MINE! Anyways you should write another one for Kid! Amazing!
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elyanaxlevilove [2014-07-12 02:39:14 +0000 UTC]
i put the part of the song and read it as it sings it
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CitrusOtakuTea In reply to Nightstardoesart [2014-11-24 16:29:29 +0000 UTC]
Almost every DTK thing I read your commenting on it, and I laugh because ur pic is DTK
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mitsukunisohma [2014-06-21 11:55:00 +0000 UTC]
i love this sooooo much! you're an amazing writer! this caused me to fangirl so hard, i threw my ipad across the room, and make me die from the feels. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!
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ClassicGamerGirl [2014-05-18 15:28:12 +0000 UTC]
Aw I love it too bad this au of me has breasts haha I'm flat :3 good job though
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horseluv1223 [2014-05-03 22:29:21 +0000 UTC]
OMIGOD OMIGOD OMIGOD!!!!!! I just died due to severe nosebleed
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ilovemybf123 [2014-04-18 13:11:35 +0000 UTC]
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CountryRebelForever [2014-04-02 13:59:14 +0000 UTC]
I loved this sooooo much!!!! This is a great exuse for not having my math test done yet!!! Keep up the great work!
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Deaththegirl-334 [2014-03-27 23:24:37 +0000 UTC]
I loved it!!! Do another!!!
i loved the part where the reader was in the same situation as Ukraine in all the time XD I was waiting for the part where a button would just go flying XD
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StellaMarris In reply to Deaththegirl-334 [2014-03-28 02:29:19 +0000 UTC]
Hah! I'm glad that you liked it!
Are you requesting a continuation or a different one shot?
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ricybeck [2014-02-15 22:10:25 +0000 UTC]
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FluffyLlamaChan [2014-01-26 15:15:09 +0000 UTC]
Was this based on the song "The Perfect Two" by Auburn?
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RyuuMiagi [2014-01-15 04:12:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh...Hot....Damn O/////O *nose bleed*
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TheDarkPhoenixQueen [2014-01-06 02:34:17 +0000 UTC]
MORE!!!!!! I WANT DA LEMON!!!!! NOW!!!
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KasseyTwoaii [2013-12-08 02:44:45 +0000 UTC]
Ermahgerd! I think I just accomplished the loudest fangirl squeal ever. I love this so much.
Ps. Lol, Flabbergasted.
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