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Published: 2008-11-22 11:31:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 164; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description It was.
Flesh was just flesh,
Loss of a tender reality
Existing in a place that doesn't
Sensing it through this present fragility

Feeling absent in crowded company
Holding onto nothing, but having everything with you
Connecting us with all we can't touch,
Thousands of miles difference diminish as we do

One day that mistake's to be known
For what it really is in light of us
Healing the mind I love you to love
In this inaudiable state I can say within trust.
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Sully-the-Sullivan [2008-11-22 11:35:39 +0000 UTC]

it's good, but it's because it is really saddening. that last line is what really got to me. just the whole poem in its entirety, is very organic; it's wonderful in the most meloncholy of ways

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stephchard In reply to Sully-the-Sullivan [2008-11-23 05:39:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the comment.
except i didn't realise it was that saddening! sorry!

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Sully-the-Sullivan In reply to stephchard [2008-11-23 21:06:38 +0000 UTC]

haha, perhaps only to me i guess it really depends what sort of mood you are in as you read,

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