Sully-the-Sullivan [2008-11-22 11:35:39 +0000 UTC]
it's good, but it's because it is really saddening. that last line is what really got to me. just the whole poem in its entirety, is very organic; it's wonderful in the most meloncholy of ways
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stephchard In reply to Sully-the-Sullivan [2008-11-23 05:39:38 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the comment. except i didn't realise it was that saddening! sorry!
Sully-the-Sullivan In reply to stephchard [2008-11-23 21:06:38 +0000 UTC]
haha, perhaps only to me i guess it really depends what sort of mood you are in as you read,
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