sparvierus [2015-12-27 10:10:04 +0000 UTC]
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FNAF has stopped being original and scary a long time ago that's why I'll focus more on other stuff. (I'm not an expert in the genre so forgive my lack of knowledge).You put the golden character (springtrap I guess) in the foreground, therefore our attention is focused there, however, the second animatronic (the blue one) is much more shiny than the other. This creates a conflict of interests and the viewer's attention goes back and forth. Not the best choice in my opinion.Then we have purple guy. It looks like it has no legs. Is it supposed to be like this? Maybe you'll finish it later.Nothing too interesting there.As for the positioning of the characters, the heads are all aligned. Good; it helps the geometry.Speaking of geometry, the perspective is off on the ground.But what about the poses? Springtrap's is good, looks "natural" and all. But the blue guy's is the total opposite. Maybe you've been influenced by anime or who knows what, but it doesn't look as tense as it should be.Lastly, purple guy. Is he hanging off the blue animatronic? Is he standing behind him? We'll never know.4/10, the subject killed it.
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thespidergamer [2016-10-10 14:48:35 +0000 UTC]
Bonnie is likeΒ Β
FrostyHeart38 [2015-12-27 12:38:41 +0000 UTC]
Nice job man
Ask-Mental-Chipmunk [2015-12-27 10:29:40 +0000 UTC]
Nice!