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StevenHoward — DC2 Lois Lane by Steve Howard
Published: 2010-01-18 13:50:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 16785; Favourites: 219; Downloads: 692
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a Lois Lane pin up for the dc2 fansitepencil,ink and colour by myself
tell me what you think
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What I think is Lois has never looked Lois-er! Sexy, fun, smart, the kind of smile that starts a fight... This girl is trouble, in a good way.
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thanks man i wanted her to have a look that Clarke would fall in love with and Perry would wonder when the next lawsuit was coming from
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Ha! Well, mission accomplished.
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I agree with everyone else who has posted so far.
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nice one... let me express my critique on it;
Design of the whole pic is really nice here, white background, window desk, female figure's placement etc... plus, colors are cool too but you could use some more shading to strenghten the expression of Lois, it would give depth to the whole art as well, especially some body parts (like hands) look like they don't have enough dimensions, Lois figure would stand out more with some more light and shade balanced contrass on her. In this like pinup kind works, figures always should be emphasized more than the background (at least i think that way)...
Lineart is good i'd say, but still has some weak spots. Again hands. When drawing a female figure who has a sexy appereance, all parts of the body should have it's own spirit. Hands don't have that, especially her right hand, the one on the table, it could be in a more elegant way than it's current state. Also when you let your weight on your arm like Lois does in the pic, the carrier hand would lean on harder on the table, in the pic it looks she's not letting her weight on her hand in a natural way because of that hand's unnatural posture
Breasts look a little deformed also. It's always your decision to determine their size, but form should always be anatomical. They could be more attractive with that way...
Proportions are good, maybe with a longer right arm, it would be even better but still it makes the figure stand out well. The way you drew her legs helps giving the sexy appereance (i gotta say they should be in a anatomical way a little more too) they're lovely. Also objects are cool too, the pc, the cup etc... you handle them very well...
last things i'd say, her shoes are solid objects like that pc on the table, so they should be pair of each other, more stable lines they need. And about the expression on her face... that's just attractive
Overall art looks really nice, but as i listed above, with some more reformings it would be better. Even in this state, it provides me inspiration... (I just intended to help you out btw, sorry if i said too much negative stuff) just keep it up buddy!
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hey no worries, all critique is welcome its how we learn im trying to brush up on my anatomical drawing as we speak just bought the human anatomy for artists book by Eliot Goldfinder its very good! anyway thanks for your thoughts
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Thanks I think my style is developing nicely
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