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Published: 2015-09-14 15:58:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1052; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 0
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Description The first scene in Rhyph. It's got 9 chapters now!~ I'm having a lot of fun writing it. ^-^
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TheStarlightPrincess [2016-04-10 10:19:12 +0000 UTC]

This is indeed a very beautiful piece with all its stunning colour combinations! What is interesting the work is full of colours but it doesn't feel like there were too much. The stained glass really takes my attention in this, it's such a grogeous background I must say. Also like how you faded the background behind the boy so that he draws your attention back from the stained glass. The lighting is great and feels quite real with the glasses' reflections on the floor and on the boy and his sword as well. ^^ You really know how to highlight!

But one thing I noticed the first time I looked there seemed to be no shadow of the boy, until the darker area - where the stones are shown better - started bothering me. I'm thinking that's supposed to be the shadow I was looking for. But to be honest it doesn't look much like a shadow to me. I mean yes it's darker area on the floor but the stony texture is a bit too clear on it. I think. And the light reflections stop suddenly, instead of fading nicely. To me it looks more like a hole than a shadow. Just my opinion though. But I suggest you to make it more fitting with the whole picture so that it don't stand out too much. Like similar to the villains shadow.

That's that. Secondly I have the thing with the perspective. As the villian is coming diagonally and the boy is attacking horizontally it creates an impression like the boy wouldn't be aming at that dark dressed person but going pas him. Attacking the air. I presume that's not what you wanted? I think this is because of the perspective and angles used. Perhaps you could have drawn the boy from a more front angle like 3/4 angle to make the attack feel better and give this scene some depths. Or then you could have tried a bit more dramatic view. Well, I suggest you to play with a stronger perspectives next time.

Finally I am thinking those pillars, especially behind the villain might need more details on them. Not much though, just a little like some small patterns or decorations.

That's all I guess, and don't forget you did a really great job on this overall! Those advices are just meant to help you with your furture works!
Wonderful job I can't help but to admire the colour galore! Keep up the great work!

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StickFreeks In reply to TheStarlightPrincess [2016-04-14 12:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your long and detailed comment!

I do agree with you on the shadow, I kind of rushed that bit and it shows.
Next time I'll be sure to keep it more even.

The perspective is also something I'd like to change about this picture, maybe I'll do a similar set up but definitely try to get a more dramatic angle.
I didn't think too much about the pillars! Adding detail seems to be something I struggle with, so I'll keep working on that.

Thanks again for the nice critique!~

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fireytika [2016-04-05 05:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Hello~ I'm from
This is such beautiful setting for a battle. The dramatic setting on this one somehow tells me that this is like final confrontation. 
The gorgeous stained glass on the background really beautiful! As well as the window's reflection on the floors. Beautiful colors you used in here. Even though there is so many colors on this one, it's not overwhelming due to nice contrast and careful selection of colors. The glass stained window is definitely my favorite part on your drawing. You have great techniques on lighting. 
However, with the beautiful colors on the background, the hero looks less focus. I'm aware that you placed your character on the light side & dark side purposely. But, what if we switch their background? I think it will make huge contrast and make your character more focus. Is the blur effect on the background is an efdect of the villain's magic? I think that's a great concept!
Also, you can try different perspective to increase the tense on battle scene. The worm eye perspective is very tricky (3 pt perspective) but will have a great impact.
Overall, you did a splendid job on this! Keep it up and happy improving ^^

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StickFreeks In reply to fireytika [2016-04-05 18:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the comment and all the compliments!

I totally agree with you on all your critique points, though.
I need to practice more 3 pt perspective stuff and have been meaning to, so maybe I'll make another picture with a similar environment soon. Thank you for your feedback!

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DoJayMi [2016-04-02 20:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Not bad. It is clearly one of those final confrontation battles. 

Next time, I recommend trying to draw the scene from a different angle, and more studies on human anatomy is always a plus. 

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StickFreeks In reply to DoJayMi [2016-04-04 12:58:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yeah definitely, those were my thoughts too when I looked back at this piece.
Ah well! Things to remember for next time~

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kyrawriter [2016-04-02 18:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Splendid

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mechanicalvalkyrie [2016-04-02 18:03:41 +0000 UTC]

The colours and the reflections are gorgeous. The stained glass looks really good .)

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StickFreeks In reply to mechanicalvalkyrie [2016-04-04 12:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I had fun with it!

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Inkcess [2016-03-28 10:30:11 +0000 UTC]

The stained glass in the background looks amazing! U shud draw stained glass more often!

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felinemon [2015-09-15 02:09:39 +0000 UTC]

SUCH PRETTY WINDOWS.

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StickFreeks In reply to felinemon [2015-09-15 03:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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felinemon In reply to StickFreeks [2015-09-16 20:56:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! <^^>

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TMSq [2015-09-14 23:13:22 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!! i really like it!! 

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StickFreeks In reply to TMSq [2015-09-15 03:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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EvieGalaxy [2015-09-14 22:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap the stained glass

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StickFreeks In reply to EvieGalaxy [2015-09-15 03:40:46 +0000 UTC]

It was actually really fun to make!

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EvieGalaxy In reply to StickFreeks [2015-09-16 00:40:40 +0000 UTC]

It looks like it! Seriously that's awesome!

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icelandicghost [2015-09-14 22:23:47 +0000 UTC]

EVERYTHING YOU DRAW IS SO SHINY, SPARKLY AND MAGICAL!

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StickFreeks In reply to icelandicghost [2015-09-15 03:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I really like drawing shiny things!

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FallenIcaruz [2015-09-14 21:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice work! Those stained glass windows are so colorful and beautiful and must have taken ages to draw

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StickFreeks In reply to FallenIcaruz [2015-09-14 22:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Actually, they weren't as bad as I thought they would be!

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HattieTattie [2015-09-14 16:52:53 +0000 UTC]

This art piece looks so stunning and enchanting! You did such an amazing job! The amazing detail, the colour choices, the shading and form of the background and your characters just make the whole piece look beautiful!~
The windows look so beautiful as well!  

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StickFreeks In reply to HattieTattie [2015-09-14 20:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I tried to work really hard on getting something cool looking.
The windows were really fun to make!~

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zackosletacos [2015-09-14 16:35:36 +0000 UTC]

The background is really stunning. Amazing job as always.

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StickFreeks In reply to zackosletacos [2015-09-14 20:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!~ I'm happy you like it!

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zackosletacos In reply to StickFreeks [2015-09-15 14:03:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome !

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