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Published: 2008-07-01 00:07:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Who am i?

I am the sun that sets in the east
That lays you down when you're feeling weak
I am the eyes that watch you wake,
the eyes that watch you waste away
Deep, into a slow decay
I watch you wilt away

Who I am does not matter anymore
For I long to be someone much more
Someone who shakes the foundations
But never gives in to sweet libation
The one I am is undefined
A blurred line
A fleeting ship
A escapee into the night

Melodies and strings
Show my broken dreams
Do not laugh at me
Its much more than it seems
I'm more than a girl with a guitar
I'm more than someone who holds a scar
I'm less than Martin Luther King
But I will continue to sing

If my heart can take me anywhere
Why can't it take me away from here?
Trapped in a circle
Confined in a square
I want to know one question...
Does anyone even care?
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Comments: 17

Cheddar-Cheese-Whiz [2008-07-06 17:50:56 +0000 UTC]

I like it alot. You're a really good poet.

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Stickman3 In reply to Cheddar-Cheese-Whiz [2008-07-07 01:40:22 +0000 UTC]

umm....thanks

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BuggerWhat [2008-07-03 00:39:42 +0000 UTC]

hahaha lol.. (to what mel said)

i never knew the sun set in the east? i always thot it set in the west?

lol its really good!!!

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Stickman3 In reply to BuggerWhat [2008-07-03 05:38:23 +0000 UTC]

thats the point...i changed the sunset thingo on purpose
thanks step

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BuggerWhat In reply to Stickman3 [2008-07-08 06:20:00 +0000 UTC]

glad to be of help lol

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Stickman3 In reply to BuggerWhat [2008-07-08 06:55:11 +0000 UTC]

lol
ur rather cheery today?

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BuggerWhat In reply to Stickman3 [2008-07-08 08:35:48 +0000 UTC]

lol am i?

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Stickman3 In reply to BuggerWhat [2008-07-08 08:49:36 +0000 UTC]

indeed
quit saying lol

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BuggerWhat In reply to Stickman3 [2008-07-08 10:38:30 +0000 UTC]

lol no!!!! NEVER!!! lolololololololol

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Stickman3 In reply to BuggerWhat [2008-07-08 10:55:58 +0000 UTC]

grr....

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BuggerWhat In reply to Stickman3 [2008-07-21 23:43:58 +0000 UTC]

hehehe

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SpiritOfTheWild [2008-07-01 03:51:40 +0000 UTC]

How many times do i have to tell you! You are Amy Hampson! Ranga and lesbian EXTRODINARE!

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Stickman3 In reply to SpiritOfTheWild [2008-07-01 04:16:37 +0000 UTC]

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Stickman3 In reply to SpiritOfTheWild [2008-07-01 04:15:51 +0000 UTC]

:'(
im not a lesbian
grr...

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SpiritOfTheWild In reply to Stickman3 [2008-07-01 06:07:12 +0000 UTC]

lol. XD i know that! i'm just having a bit of fun!... how about... hum... poem writing extrodinare!?

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Stickman3 In reply to SpiritOfTheWild [2008-07-01 06:34:45 +0000 UTC]

thats better....less offensive
lol

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SpiritOfTheWild In reply to Stickman3 [2008-07-01 06:39:37 +0000 UTC]

lol. whatever

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