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Stickman3 — World Domination by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-08-09 12:23:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Today I became something that I depise
Jealousy tingled all the way up my spine
Even though we agreed we were done
It hurt so much, I could feel that you'd won

You had my heart on loan and you later returned it
We slowly slipped apart from one another
I cared for you, but it was not the same
Nothing will ever be the same

You changed my life, made me happy for awhile
Everyone knew, they could see it in my smile
But now I stare at you with another girl
She is standing in my place, a cheap replacement

She is standing in my place
Gives the smile that I gave
Looks around to parade
What was mine

I try to behave, act rational for awhile
Look right, look left, pretend to smile
It's so hard to do, but it wasn't when I had you.
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Comments: 15

gallymont [2008-08-24 10:44:22 +0000 UTC]

World domination and a mental collapse, could one ask for more?

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Stickman3 In reply to gallymont [2008-08-24 11:03:37 +0000 UTC]

lol
You sound just like my best friend.

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gallymont In reply to Stickman3 [2008-08-26 10:02:46 +0000 UTC]

lol, good thing bad thing?

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Stickman3 In reply to gallymont [2008-08-26 10:36:49 +0000 UTC]

dont know
lol

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BuggerWhat [2008-08-10 02:58:22 +0000 UTC]

omg... now for me!!! again...
LOL
i love poems

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Stickman3 In reply to BuggerWhat [2008-08-10 04:19:05 +0000 UTC]

lol
you write one
i havent seen one of yours in ages

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BuggerWhat In reply to Stickman3 [2008-08-14 00:35:28 +0000 UTC]

i will i will!!!

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badalice-tag [2008-08-09 12:56:45 +0000 UTC]

WORLD DOMINATIOn..u kno how bad this is right?? like..everytime i see him now i'll b thinking of this...wd..lol..no seriousl tho...

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Stickman3 In reply to badalice-tag [2008-08-09 13:00:31 +0000 UTC]

thats a good thing....you're thinking of world domination
lol

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ShadowDragon777 [2008-08-09 12:29:09 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done, this is a feeling I think everyone can relate to. On a critical note I thought it was going to continue its rhyme scheme, but it didn't lose value by not. I've always thought if you go for rhyme one should stick to it or if you go for open to follow that, but this is an interesting meld. Good job, I like it

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Stickman3 In reply to ShadowDragon777 [2008-08-09 12:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
My thoughts were that if i kept up with the rhyme I would make it overly dramatic and i really didnt want to make it so.

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ShadowDragon777 In reply to Stickman3 [2008-08-09 12:46:54 +0000 UTC]

Whatever works, as long as its gets your point across and you like it. But like I said, good work, it was a nice read.

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Stickman3 In reply to ShadowDragon777 [2008-08-09 13:04:06 +0000 UTC]

Most of my other ones keep the rhyme up but it didnt work for this one.
If its ok i'm gonna check out your gallery very soon.

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ShadowDragon777 In reply to Stickman3 [2008-08-09 13:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Have at it, I appreciate the traffic and any comments or criticism you may have on what you see.

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Stickman3 In reply to ShadowDragon777 [2008-08-09 13:01:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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