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Stilleschrei β€” Shine on me, a poem

Published: 2013-01-24 23:14:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1421; Favourites: 166; Downloads: 0
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Description Shine on me

Oh please somebody set me free,
for the waters are rising over me.

I didn’t see the water come at all,
Now they’re pushing, trying to make me fall.

In this misery I lift my eyes and look up high,
hoping for salvation from beyond the sky.

All I ask You is: help me flee my misery,
so please shine Your healing light on me.

Wrote the poem 2013-01-23
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UPDATE 8th of Januari 2018: I replaced the original file with this file, I took this latest shot outside Roermond, when river Maas ran wild
Original file
Took this shot at the banks of river Ijsel, Arnhem, the Netherlands.
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Comments: 213

Stilleschrei In reply to ??? [2018-05-07 22:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much Julia!

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Skye0011 In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-05-08 06:20:09 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome Wiebe!! ❀

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floriaiglenoir [2018-04-15 08:45:40 +0000 UTC]

...wonderful and very emotional poem
The photograph is beautiful ,and resuming perfectly the essence of the poem...a very "blue and sad atmosphere" and at the same time the soft and almost weak sparkles of the sun ray trying to bring some hope, some shy "enlightening"... Β 

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Stilleschrei In reply to floriaiglenoir [2018-04-16 18:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much dear Flori!
Your words describe perfectly what I was trying to make with the poem and the photo...

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floriaiglenoir In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-04-17 08:02:55 +0000 UTC]

...my true pleasure, dear Wiebe ...comprehension between Artists is wonderful,and so important, Β Β  yes
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Stilleschrei In reply to floriaiglenoir [2018-04-17 16:52:49 +0000 UTC]

yes it is! thanks very much Flori!

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erene [2018-02-10 09:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful capture

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Stilleschrei In reply to erene [2018-02-13 21:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much Erene!

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sc62568 [2018-02-05 18:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Great photo that fits your poem perfectly.Β  I really appreciate the poem as it echos some of my own feelings the past month and a half.Β  David, the ancient poet king, had something very similar to say in Psalm 121 "I lift up my eyes to the hills.Β  From where does my help come?Β  My help comes from the Lord..."

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Stilleschrei In reply to sc62568 [2018-02-05 19:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Steven... yes, I've singing this psalm eversince I was 20 years old!
Unto the hills around, I lift my longing eyes
Oh where, Oh where for me will my salvation come?
My help shall come, from God the Lord
From God the Lord, who heaven and earth hath made!

When I wrote the poem, I wanted it to be like a psalm

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dorothyPa04 [2018-02-01 20:26:19 +0000 UTC]

wow,Β  Amazing the wayΒ  water il floating,Β  great shot (as Always)

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Stilleschrei In reply to dorothyPa04 [2018-02-01 21:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Raffaella!

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Lady-68 [2018-01-26 17:42:34 +0000 UTC]

Β Β Β 

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Stilleschrei In reply to Lady-68 [2018-01-27 20:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Lady-68 In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-05-07 06:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Β  My pleasure!Β Β Β Β 

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Muwaten82 [2018-01-22 13:43:12 +0000 UTC]

....

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Stilleschrei In reply to Muwaten82 [2018-01-22 17:38:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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ShinyphotoArt [2018-01-20 06:43:26 +0000 UTC]

So touching work

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Stilleschrei In reply to ShinyphotoArt [2018-01-20 15:46:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much Sani

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ShinyphotoArt In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-01-21 06:19:05 +0000 UTC]

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ansdesign [2018-01-17 21:11:12 +0000 UTC]

"Life begins at the end of your comfortzone"

Wat een mooi licht heb je hier gevangen, lieve Wiebe.
En natuurlijk vergezeld met een van je prachtige gedichtjes ...

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Stilleschrei In reply to ansdesign [2018-01-17 22:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Dank je wel Ans!

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Earth-Hart [2018-01-16 08:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Both image & poem are great

And there'll be much more flooding to come in the future.

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Stilleschrei In reply to Earth-Hart [2018-01-16 10:38:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much Will

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Earth-Hart In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-01-20 23:18:28 +0000 UTC]

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vanndra [2018-01-13 01:27:07 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful image and wonderful words!

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Stilleschrei In reply to vanndra [2018-01-13 11:11:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

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vanndra In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-01-14 01:52:29 +0000 UTC]

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Stilleschrei In reply to vanndra [2018-01-14 18:30:54 +0000 UTC]

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always-mep [2018-01-12 21:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Awesome poetry to match the image. Both images are wonderful!

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Stilleschrei In reply to always-mep [2018-01-12 21:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much Maryellen!

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always-mep In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-01-12 21:57:33 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome, Weibe.

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Stilleschrei In reply to always-mep [2018-01-13 10:40:52 +0000 UTC]

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Cairngorm747 [2018-01-10 12:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow. What wonderful words to go with this beautiful image. Nice match.Β 

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Stilleschrei In reply to Cairngorm747 [2018-01-10 21:19:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much!

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LindArtz [2018-01-10 01:14:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice capture, and wonderful poem. !

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Stilleschrei In reply to LindArtz [2018-01-10 06:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much Linda

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Olga17 [2018-01-09 23:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful photo!Great poetry! Β 

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Stilleschrei In reply to Olga17 [2018-01-10 06:08:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much Olga

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Olga17 In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-01-10 18:47:20 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome! Β 

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Stilleschrei In reply to Olga17 [2018-01-10 19:54:45 +0000 UTC]

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Bermiro [2018-01-09 19:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Wonderlijke foto in het B/W,knap gedaan Wiebe!Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β 

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Stilleschrei In reply to Bermiro [2018-01-09 22:15:42 +0000 UTC]

Dank je wel Bert!
(eigenlijk is het een kleuren foto, maar het was zo grijs die dag dat het een z/w lijkt!)

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m-gosia [2018-01-09 19:10:43 +0000 UTC]

Amazing workΒ Β Β 

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Stilleschrei In reply to m-gosia [2018-01-09 22:14:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much Goshia!

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m-gosia In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-01-10 16:10:20 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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bindii [2018-01-09 18:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!! Β 

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Stilleschrei In reply to bindii [2018-01-09 22:14:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much Carol!

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bindii In reply to Stilleschrei [2018-01-10 13:38:36 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure Wiebe!Β Β 

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Stilleschrei In reply to bindii [2018-01-10 20:24:28 +0000 UTC]

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