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a timeless trickle,an endless pain.
trapped in the darkness,
lost in the rain.
~thaniel
pops is in the hospital today,
this is for him.
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Hey! I featured this in my journal: noarael.deviantart.com/journalβ¦
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thanks heather ^^ like the poem? hehe
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I do! It goes very well with the picture.
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I think I need to favorite this in my photography account. It's just brilliant.
I'm glad your father is doing better!
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thank you, yeah he had a wreck in 2007, still has some sciatic nerve pain unfortunately
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Oh no, that sucks. 
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yeah, he still feels pain 
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that's a gorgeous picture. And perfect balance of positive and negative space.
Awesome job!
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Beautiful colours. I love the interaction between the blues and oranges/reds.
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wow how did I missthis? it's gorgeous. how is he?
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thx david 
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well that's good.
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i'm glad he was, many ppl i hear connected /w strokes haven't regained any reasonable sort of functionality- sounds like your old man's a tough bloke
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The colors are amazing man.. and the composition, it really looks like a realistic paint.
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Yup, at first I thought it was some modern art kinda thing, the I noticed it was too perfect (no brushes) to be a paint. ^^
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but i totally painted it 
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stones in liquid amber... nothing like a stream to wash the pain away. You should try dipping your bare feet in a shallow, pebbled river... I did for the first time when i was 5 years old and i will never forget that experience.
Send my best to your pops.
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walked in a river to take a few shots today- comfort wasn't on my mind tho, syringes were
(the water felt good tho- runs down from the rockies i think)
will do
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syringes? hahaha! that bad? I'm gald people over here snort and sniff more that they stick needles (not that i have anything to do with that, i swear to god
but i'll keep in mind not to remove my sandals in water if ever i visit. My sister will be moving next year to Florida.
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i've seen them on sidewalks by the river before- so, naturally, i feared stepping on one in the river.
cheaper not to 
not sure what florida's like, never been- hope she likes it 
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Good for him!
My dad smokes three packs of Marlboro Red a day. But he never drinks, not even beer (cuz he'll get nasty rashes and has to get alcohol allergy shots if he does)
I never smoked a stick in my life but i drink like a fish (on occassion, and there are plenty of occassions 
What a pair we'd make, me and my dad, hehehe!
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you could write a story, call it 'habits'
set it in a busy city- a small apartment in gutted high-rise,
a father alone, his love passed away- his second wife left him.
he smokes alone much of the day, sitting at a table in a dimly-lit room,
his only source of 'entertainment'- an unfinished crossword puzzle and regrets.
the son foots the rent, "why can't you get a job!?" home from the bar after a complicated shift.
too much to drink, too many responsabilities- his father all that remains of what was once a happy family, long ago.
he loves his father, can't bare to throw him out. the man endured great loss and pulled the pair through many tough times;
but it was becoming too much.
his father's once enduring spirit was finally broke...
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Wow, that is quite sad... do you write short stories? I don't but i enjoy reading them. If so, send me some of your stories through email.
Yeah, me and my dad have our yelling moments, but mostly because of the use of which car. He's so protective over his own vehicle, and sometimes, i'd "borrow" it for a spin. He smokes a lot cuz he's executive of a multi-national corp. I drink cuz it's a habit i developed in college. hehehe. BUT, now that i'm working, i only drink after a rough day in court, a shot or two just to get the edge off. I'm a litigation lawyer and teach part time at our State University. Drinking a lot now wouldn't be too nice on my records.
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i do, be glad to
"he smokes a lot cuz he's executive of a multi-national corp" seen that again and again in flicks/books- smoke follows the stressed (lol, they're litterally steaming all the time)
a lawyer?! the firm is one of my favorite movies (lawyers are fascinating, and i suppose that's because lawyers are the world anymore)
yeah- watch that drinking habit (liver, driving)
wouldn't want to lose a friend over a tonic
(i commend your teaching too; too often i've found teachers to be those who can't do- it's always nice to stumble across a proff. who's professionally successful/knowledgeable and giving of their time)
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Thanks buddy. haven't had an accident since the first time i got behind the wheels (thank god)
Hahaha! Exactly... those can, do. Those who can't, teach. But i haul ass in court, no question about that 
what's keeping you busy, bro?
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"haven't had an accident since the first time i got behind the wheels" good to hear, let's keep that record
busy? still figuring life out... 
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"busy? still figuring life out... frustrated" ahhh... 
Don't worry bro. we all have those moments of frustration. And i am trying hard myself to figure out what life is all about. I can tell you are too, given the depth of your replies. In many levels, you and me both think alike.
I think jury duty is exciting, if your have an exciting case. But it could also be deathly boring too. Especially if there are plenty of documentary matters that you have to sift through.
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"we all have those moments of frustration." good to be reminded of such
"In many levels, you and me both think alike." 
"in a way, it is easier here." ah, we do that too sometimes (for "small" issues, small claims court, etc.)
"Send word soon what happens to your jury service." will do
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Wow! This is really gorgeous! The ripples in the water look beautiful....Love the poem as well. ^^
And your dad's in the hospital? I hope it's nothing too serious....
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it was pretty serious (spinal) but he's out now and doing better 
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That is pretty serious....I can imagine how upset and worried you've probably been....I'm glad to hear that he's been released and doing better though.
Here's to hoping your dad makes a full and speedy recovery! <3
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up and 'walking' already- been remarkable. (hard to keep him from over doing it)
actually the 2nd time- 1st one had him down for quite a while
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Up and walking already huh? Glad to hear it! Your dad sounds like a tuff one. ^^
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determined/driven for sure- always has been. (something i don't believe i inherited)
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love love it! its soo pretty, really soothing too, even though its so colourful.. sigh... really like this
PS are they pebbles? real ones? only asking coz iv never seen em so colourful
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rocks about 2" across, i'm a big fan of digital postwork- playing /w color levels brought out the color (drab and dull before) to each their own i s'pose
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this is so beautiful! 
it's a nice gift
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