Comments: 11
ownpersonalhell [2008-04-04 00:33:24 +0000 UTC]
really good
i love the emotion, i so cried when i read it
it was so sad
how he said how he didnt want he like that
awww
i love the drawing though
so good
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stlbabie24 In reply to ownpersonalhell [2008-04-04 05:04:48 +0000 UTC]
I was upset and like no, I hate to admit it but I look ahead to make sure he came back lol then once I new that he did I countinued to read.
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AiNana [2008-03-30 12:49:09 +0000 UTC]
he was so stupid by leaving just like that but thanks to this, now I love jake >..< XD
your bella is pretty !!
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Fallen-Deadwalker [2008-03-23 12:28:56 +0000 UTC]
I was almost crying as well when he left her, god and then killing them both..almost tsk tsk, hopefully Edward has learned from his mistakes lol
great expression!
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stlbabie24 In reply to Fallen-Deadwalker [2008-03-23 12:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, and me too I will admit that when I read that he left her I was shocked and looked ahead in the book to make sure he came back, didnt really read so much as just made sure he was back lol.
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josienne-x-wongs2 [2008-03-15 20:54:59 +0000 UTC]
aww poor Bella
Great picture though
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stlbabie24 In reply to josienne-x-wongs2 [2008-03-15 22:23:51 +0000 UTC]
thanks, yeah it is a sad one but it shows her emotions well
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