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stoegl β€” Vienna's Loneliness
Published: 2009-06-14 13:10:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 186; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Loneliness inside my heart
This feeling is cruel hard

Separation is so mean
Doing things I've never seen

Away from you, so endless far
But you’re shining like a star

Thinking about you every day
In my deepest thoughts you stay

My life is wasted if you’re gone
You can not be replaced by one

Just my feelings about you
Will my sad life continue

Sitting here the hundredth time
When will you be truly mine?

Thinking about the words everywhere
Say 'I love you' is a hard thing I swear

Take this words and their expression for real
Come to me, there are much wounds to heal
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Comments: 4

evil-jack17 [2009-10-27 03:43:13 +0000 UTC]

This is beautifully written. You're very good with couplets.

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stoegl In reply to evil-jack17 [2009-10-27 20:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again ^^ but could you please explain the meaning of couplets? ^^"

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evil-jack17 In reply to stoegl [2009-10-27 23:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Couplets are two consecutive lines that rhyme. Such as..

"I placed my foot hard on the throttle,
as I drank from the soda bottle"

So this poem consists of nine couplets.

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stoegl In reply to evil-jack17 [2009-10-28 17:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Okay, thanks for explaining^^

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