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Published: 2018-07-12 06:58:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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This is the masked version of Jaxon Stone's suit. It's mask has Thermal vision and night vision. It has a comm system for talking to Talion during missions.Related content
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Thanks! The Black Panther's Sister was intrigued about Jaxon and gave him this suit to fight crime in New York with, And did you know that even though Jaxon doesn't smile much, Talion is the only one who makes him laugh no matter what?
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Really? Thatβs cool π
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Yep, and Spidey really doesn't care much about most things except being teased by girls, cuz that makes him feel weak and vulnerable, and he hates school bullies, cuz no way is he gonna let them ruin his classmates' lives.
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He has a well developed character, Iβd say.
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He does, and I've posted a height comparison pic of Talion and Spider-man so you can see how tall they are compared to each other.
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I saw it. They look great side by side.
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Yep, they do for sure! I'm writing a story about the two heroes and it's a good one! Would you like to help?
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What can I do?
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Well, i'm running pretty low on ideas for the villains and the plot and and the entire story in general. Plus, since you wrote World of Chaos II recently, i figured you'd be perfect for the job of writing a draft and giving ideas.
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Alright, let me hear what you have first. I need to know what Iβm working with, yeah? π€
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So it starts off with a bank robbery like in any new superhero's life, and Greg Adams is in the middle of a confrontation between the police and the criminals. He tried to run, but the bad guys shot an accelerator gun at Greg by accident when they tried to hit their car and move faster. The blast hit his chest and made his cells run faster, so he ends up becoming faster than he used to be and can run up to 210 miles an hour. That's where i hit rock bottom cuz i don't know what else to do from there.
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Alright. Iβll see what I can do with that. Iβll write it in DAβs stash writer.
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Ok. The title is Marvel's Talion and Spiderman, And we'll be writing it in chapters.
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Gotcha. You want me to write chapter 1?
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Actually we're gonna compare each other's drafts in notes so we can decide which one is best for publishing. and we'll need to write each chapter with a separate page, so readers won't get confused. like Chap. 1: pg. 1, Chap. 1: pg. 2 and something like that.Β
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Alright, I'll start my page one draft soon.
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I'll be working on mine too.
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I've got sta.sh open in a separate tab currently.
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same, but it could all go horribly wrong for me if i happen to close it and not save, so i'm scared now lol
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Don't worry, bro. Just be careful with your mouse and cursor.
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I'm trying my best not to rush, so i may be ok here.
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Yeah, I'm taking my time with this
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Me too. I'm literally playing music and just jamming while i write.
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