Zero-Zivan [2018-09-01 00:22:56 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the character limit is by far the most frustrating thing I've had to deal with across a lot of my submissions as well. Still, you are finding the best spots to end the "chapter" and leave a somewhat suspenseful note for your readers to wait for the next entry!
And honestly I'm looking forward to it! Obviously it's been posted already, but I can say that I'm enjoying seeing the teams really unifying for the cause. They have every reason to be nervous, but even so they're managing to hold it together with the combined patience of Abigail, the wisdom of Gunther, the power in Jonas, and the analysis Miyu gave them. I guess that would also explain why Theodore feels a little disheartened - a bit of a third wheel at the moment.
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StormBuster In reply to Zero-Zivan [2018-09-01 15:19:06 +0000 UTC]
It totally used to not exist too, since I've uploaded multiple 10k+ word stories in the past which makes it even more frustrating at times. I appreciate it! Though admittedly I did get a bit lucky that there was a pretty obvious break point here : p
Despite my complaints in the next chapter about involving too many characters, it has been fun writing them all and their different personalities and i'm glad you've been enjoying it! Yeah, Theo hasn't quite figured out his talent just yet. He's got the motivation though and someone willing to help so maybe that'll come sooner rather then later!
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