Comments: 34
INKA-UwU [2017-01-02 01:51:26 +0000 UTC]
this is a cute story but its alittle rushed ;-; BUT STILL CUTE
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BeetleTea908 [2016-08-09 22:25:57 +0000 UTC]
awww that's so cute
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maijeon [2016-02-12 05:11:42 +0000 UTC]
dammint
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Lilwolf102 [2016-01-24 03:28:21 +0000 UTC]
What the heck did I just read
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AmyTheOne [2015-11-03 00:58:36 +0000 UTC]
lots of errors with spelling but other than that this is pretty good.
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jasmin10122 [2015-07-07 04:52:21 +0000 UTC]
it is actually dragon SLAYER but other than that this is great
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RP-96Neko [2015-03-10 23:56:19 +0000 UTC]
I love it but i dont know why everyone calls grays master Ur when her name is Ul
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ASDFGHJKLMNBVCXZ1 [2015-01-24 06:40:52 +0000 UTC]
. . . . Erm, well, Lucy sure is interesting in this story. . . . a bit bipolar. . . .
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Kyoko-Kimo [2014-12-28 19:57:42 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... I WUV DIS!!! XD
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DJDiamond [2014-12-22 22:00:03 +0000 UTC]
Cool
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Pencilrainbow [2014-11-07 21:51:24 +0000 UTC]
IS LUCY THAT DUMB!Lucy is just gonna ask"are you gonna destroy the town?"What if THEY WERE AND THEY LIED!!!!!!!! But its good anyways!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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elephantgirl202 [2014-09-21 02:24:34 +0000 UTC]
And when I smile shit gets real. GOT REAL
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AnimeLover5656 [2014-06-26 06:10:47 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE THE STORY!!!
grammar errors and time skips were makin mai head spin though...... i was just like WHAAAAA?!?!?!?!
(word of advice try to edit a little more before yew submit)
plx dun hurt meh!!! im only trying to make yer writing more fantastic
I STILL WUV YER STORY!!!!
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animefreak200228 [2014-04-22 01:31:21 +0000 UTC]
I really wuved this and by the way its dragon slayer and there was a lot of time skips but its still cute
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animefreak200228 In reply to StoryReaders [2014-04-27 07:48:21 +0000 UTC]
but it is still an awesome story and I loved it pls continue
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Roxyninja100 [2014-03-07 23:55:36 +0000 UTC]
Lol funny
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TalentNotRequired [2014-02-03 10:52:41 +0000 UTC]
Cute, but the grammatical errors and confusing spacing was making my head spin. Love the idea though.
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StoryReaders In reply to TalentNotRequired [2014-02-05 00:39:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Sorry for the grammar. I type fast, so the grammar goes like that.
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SoccerStrider01 [2014-01-25 04:53:32 +0000 UTC]
Aww this is so kawaii keep it up great author chan ^_^
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TinyBirdGames [2013-12-01 03:51:50 +0000 UTC]
Heh, it's cute.
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