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Published: 2012-03-15 08:23:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 3109; Favourites: 164; Downloads: 20
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Francoeur no doubt deserves a set of wings.
A Monster in Paris {Un Monstre a Paris}
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First and foremost, this picture is amazing. You are heading in exactly the right direction. As far as anything to improve upon, your gesture looks pretty solid (which honestly, I think is the most important part). Not too stiff, but always remember effortless fluidity in poses along with proper balance and proportion is needed for most organic shapes.
As far as rendering goes, I don't know what you work with to color these and what kind of station you set up, but if you are using any kind of tablet, I would make sure its in a stable area and I would work on tidying up your line work. It's too loose for the look your trying to go for. That goes for the landscape in the background, no matter what, sketchy or clean, perspective must always be clear (and not seem wobbly or tilted). However, for this case, you are doing well, just tidy up the buildings that are closer (around his feet) and you can get as messy as you want as you head out towards the Eiffel Tower, because its farther/tinier and harder to see.
Your color pallet is great! I feel like you hesitated with the darks though a little bit? It's okay to push contrast (I encourage it)! Also to create contrast you don't have to use straight up black and white. You can do it with complimentary colors even if they don't belong there, MAKE them belong there. It's your vision!
I would also pay attention to the shadows around the edges of his eyes. its a mask that sits on top of his face, so no matter what it will create some sort of cast shadow (even a tiny one).
Other than that, I love this piece! The colors are awesome and he's so damn cute! Just keep going in this direction with your pieces!
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Momma loves you baby <3
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I honestly felt that you went a bit easy on me, but thank you so much.
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haha, I thought I was being to hard. /wrists. I'm not good at giving critiques, I like to call them suggestions.
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No no it was good. I was so nervous about my work that when I read your critique I felt like I needed to brace for more. Thanks again.
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The Movie Reminds Me Of The Characters Of Superjail:
Emile- Jared: Sometimes His Has The Same Personally.
Maud- Charice: Love Interest.
Raoul- Jacknife: Same Hairstyle.
Lucille- Alice: Same Hair Color.
FrancΕur- The Warden: At First He Was About To Be Lord Stingray Due To His Mutation Form Or Something, But His Teeth And His Eyes Are Like The Warden's.
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Good style. Nic drawing I must say. Kinda simple, but pretty and interesting. Congrats
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This is great, lovely colours, and I love how detailed your eyes always are. Though I agree with that critique, I think the background/clouds near the foreground should be a bit more in focus
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Thanks so much. :>
Heh heh yeah yeah I know I got a talk down by a good friend and artist of mine about the background.
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o v o love the coloring and background on it. <33333
absolutely adorable.
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;u; That means a lot to me! Thanks!
I was so unsure of the background but now. fdjskfja
Thanks!
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