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Published: 2015-08-22 01:55:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1241; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 1
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Description Warning this origin is very dark, if you can't handle it then go back to watching Tella Tubbies. Jk lol

His Mother killed his Father. His Grandfather is the Enemy. He is part of a secret bloodline. Don't know what's going on?...neither does He.

Naron only lives by 3 words: FIGHT. KILL. REPEAT. This war with the "Brotherhood" had been around for a decade it started the year 3031. Naron was captured and put in a prison cell. He was kept alive but tortured because of his bloodline. Everday every hour they burned him, beat him, cut him, and made him train to kill. They were making him into a weapon. Naron had so much rage, then one night the Brotherhood scientists took him and started to do surgery on him still conscious! The last words he remembers from the doctor was "Don't scream". After they were done his mind was erased and the Brotherhood used Naron as an assassin. He would go around the galaxy in secret to kill off any fighters. At this time was called "the Black Skull". Black Skull's biggest nemesis was the archer Deosma. In a fight with Deosma, Deosma put an arrow into Naron's neck destroying the mind control chip. Later back in Naron's cell, Naron started to see visions of his past...a dad-a castle-and a marking of a strike symbol. He started to hear noises outside his cell the Brotherhood were in battle with...the Spectrums! 7 warriors in color were taking on a whole army of Brotherhood knights! In the commotion his cell door was blasted open by a red knight with a flaming sword! The solider looked at Naron with compassion and held out his hand. But one of the Brotherhood knights killed the warrior before Naron got the chance. Naron in rage, killed the knight using his thumbs to jab his eyes until he reached his skull! Naron looked at the dying Red warrior and promised him he would repay him by taking his place. The solider told Naron to hide away in the ship that he came in. So he did and took his sword and armor and left to change his future and find his past...
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Comments: 66

SoFeArTs [2015-09-12 10:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Awesome origin story,man. Keep up the good work!

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streak663 In reply to SoFeArTs [2015-09-12 11:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks dude!

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White-fox21 [2015-08-23 06:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Hehe nice
its not that dark ;-; I thought it would be darker
you did good ^-^

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streak663 In reply to White-fox21 [2015-08-23 13:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Well sorry I didn't put Gore or cursing in it lol

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White-fox21 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-23 19:46:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha nah it's good you didn't need to

hmm *reads other comments* hey I'm not that nice ;-; I'm quite evil when I wanna be

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streak663 In reply to White-fox21 [2015-08-23 19:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Lol well I didn't know, I gotta be careful around you lol

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White-fox21 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-23 19:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah it could be costly I'm a girl of misdirection

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streak663 In reply to White-fox21 [2015-08-23 20:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol well you look like a nice girl but also the kind who can be fun and be the authority

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White-fox21 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-23 20:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Hah yeah but I also like relaxing and reading

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streak663 In reply to White-fox21 [2015-08-23 20:17:48 +0000 UTC]

I can tell. ^^ I can also tell you have great taste in guys lol

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White-fox21 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-23 20:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Heh well idk about that I've only dated one guy and he was a jerk

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streak663 In reply to White-fox21 [2015-08-23 20:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Ooh that sucks well remember I said you'll find your guy one day don't worry

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White-fox21 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-23 20:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ^-^ I trust you thanks

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streak663 In reply to White-fox21 [2015-08-23 20:24:56 +0000 UTC]

YAY! I told you

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White-fox21 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-23 20:26:59 +0000 UTC]

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Sketchylicious66 [2015-08-22 10:33:39 +0000 UTC]

... OK like a million things I have to say here...
DARK AS HELL FOR ONE THING
Name : The Spectrums ? ... I like it ...
OMG what if Naron and Sketchy were child hood friends , but so distant ago that they barely remember. Then don't really care thinking that they either got killed or captured already.
I have to update sky's origin
OMG HIS EYES ....REALLY? I put such a vivid image in my head.
.....wow
I like it
Someone's gotta figure this all out and write something about it.
PS I had a dream. White folder killed me

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streak663 In reply to Sketchylicious66 [2015-08-22 14:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, and that sounds like a good idea! Also That dream could be in a story but not White-fox bc she's too nice also she's the queen.

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Sketchylicious66 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 16:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ^^ maybe crow then ^^

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streak663 In reply to Sketchylicious66 [2015-08-22 16:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. Maybe right now we just got 2 new members. I'm making their posters

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Sketchylicious66 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 17:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh OK tell me when we have all our Knights so I can make pic

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streak663 In reply to Sketchylicious66 [2015-08-22 17:24:15 +0000 UTC]

I so will. This partnership thing isn't so bad

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Sketchylicious66 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 17:25:39 +0000 UTC]

OK. Yeah we make great leaders

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streak663 In reply to Sketchylicious66 [2015-08-22 17:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Remember this is a tie!

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Sketchylicious66 In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 18:52:24 +0000 UTC]

That may never be broken

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anstasia-kunningham [2015-08-22 07:47:24 +0000 UTC]

Awesome !

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streak663 In reply to anstasia-kunningham [2015-08-22 14:32:20 +0000 UTC]

I know! Are you going to make an origin?

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anstasia-kunningham In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 14:33:28 +0000 UTC]

Origin for the green warrior ?

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streak663 In reply to anstasia-kunningham [2015-08-22 14:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Yes

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anstasia-kunningham In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 14:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Maybe I will....

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streak663 In reply to anstasia-kunningham [2015-08-22 14:39:15 +0000 UTC]

YAY!

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anstasia-kunningham In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 14:41:44 +0000 UTC]

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streak663 In reply to anstasia-kunningham [2015-08-22 14:32:10 +0000 UTC]

I know! Are you going to make an origin?

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streak663 In reply to anstasia-kunningham [2015-08-22 14:16:43 +0000 UTC]

Thx

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anstasia-kunningham In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 14:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Np

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Deosma [2015-08-22 04:01:23 +0000 UTC]

I wish I knew how to draw a bow... or any weapon for that matter.

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streak663 In reply to Deosma [2015-08-22 04:06:26 +0000 UTC]

Lol I only fight with my fists

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Deosma In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 04:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Same here :smile:

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NomiNinjaGirl [2015-08-22 03:36:33 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap. Freaking dark as heck.

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streak663 In reply to NomiNinjaGirl [2015-08-22 03:50:04 +0000 UTC]

Yep but still freaking Awesome! You should read Sketchy's

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UnderMised [2015-08-22 02:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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streak663 In reply to UnderMised [2015-08-22 02:33:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Are you going to make one too or just a single picture of yourself?

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UnderMised In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 02:36:20 +0000 UTC]

I know but i have no idea left.

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streak663 In reply to UnderMised [2015-08-22 02:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol then you could just take your time and do a picture of you just in your suit

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UnderMised In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 02:46:09 +0000 UTC]

Ok i'll try

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streak663 In reply to UnderMised [2015-08-22 02:48:21 +0000 UTC]

You don't have to if you want

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UnderMised In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 02:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Ok. :3

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Kaituhi [2015-08-22 02:18:05 +0000 UTC]

DAYUM.

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streak663 In reply to Kaituhi [2015-08-22 02:19:44 +0000 UTC]

Yep my story is Dark girl.

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Kaituhi In reply to streak663 [2015-08-22 02:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Darkest of the dark, dark. 

Bro.

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streak663 In reply to Kaituhi [2015-08-22 02:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry I'll make your character's look tomorrow

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