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Published: 2017-01-25 21:59:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 612; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 4
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Description Well. Today is the birthday of a certain someone, namely my wonderful friend ! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!  I hope you have an absolutely amazing day, you really deserve it! Thank you for being such an amazing friend!!! I really wish there wasn't an ocean separating us, but I can't wait until we meet again, whether that's in just over a year (AHH!) or sooner (if I'm able to convince my parents xD)! Anyway, just thank you!
This isn't quite as well-worded as I planned, ironically, despite writing being my thing I'm not very good at putting things into words sometimes. xD But our friendship means a lot to me! I hope it shows in this gift.

If I'd thought seeing the plains from just outside the cavern's entrance was something, I decided I must have been terribly mistaken. That was nothing but a narrow strip, a glimpse of the wonder this view provided.

The flatlands stretched away in all directions from the mountains, a few hills rising and falling as a transition between the two extremes. Below my paws, silver birches spread out like a pond down the side of the mountain, transitioning to brown-barked trees closer to the bottom, where the stream splashed down into the larger river, which wound away across the fields. A strong wind blew directly into my face, carrying the scents of faraway places to my muzzle. Closing my eyes, I inhaled deeply, trying to decipher each little nuance in the air. It smelled cold, like there could be more snow on the way, but also a little like pine trees, like there was a forest somewhere in the distance, out of sight over the horizon.


So, anyway, this was inspired by the above scene from Snowy's fan fic Take Flight , which I am honoured to beta for! This is a scene from Chapter 23 in which Caspian (the cat on the right) takes Ravenpaw (the cat on the left) to see this amazing view. As soon as I read the scene, I wanted to draw it, it was written so beautifully! I may have taken some artistic liberties. I believe the sky was actually described as being grey and Ravenpaw should really have a splint on her tail and leg (I think) but I didn't really want to add them in as it probably wouldn't be particularly aesthetically pleasing. Actually re-reading the scene, I don't think Ravenpaw could actually see pine trees. Whoops. But anyway, I hope you can overlook that! xD
If you don't already read Take Flight, I highly suggest you do so! 

I'm probably going to notice a bunch of things I didn't quite finish as soon as I post this, but honestly I could probably work on it forever and still find faults in it. So, I'm just going to go ahead and post this! I hope you like it!

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Snowfeather4876 [2017-06-10 21:46:20 +0000 UTC]

I GOT ROUND TO COMMENTING ON THIS! WOULD YOU LOOK AT THAT? Anyway, I really loved reading this scene, and you've drawn it so beautifully! It's the little touches that make it stand out, like that bird, the sparkle on the water, the heaps of snow... The shading is so amazing, too, especially on the mountains, but honestly, it's difficult to pick out just one amazing thing from this.

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Streamwhisker In reply to Snowfeather4876 [2017-06-12 21:02:55 +0000 UTC]

I'M VERY ROUD, WALLACE
Thank eweeeeee! I'm super duper proud of the mountains, so I think they're probably my favourite bit.

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Snowfeather4876 In reply to Streamwhisker [2017-06-23 12:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Agh, I just love it to much.

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Snowfall16 [2017-01-27 00:18:42 +0000 UTC]

AHHHH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!!!!!! YOU DREW THIS SCENE!!!   
Oh gosh, and there's SO MUCH DETAIL in it!!!! You drew like every single tree and there's even a bird, which I didn't add in but now I wish I had!! It looks utterly, absolutely, amazingly amazing!     And then you did the little birch grove and the little mounds of snow and the stream and then mountains and stuff!!

I don't think words have the capability of describing how much I absolutely adore this gift! I'm sorry now I didn't get back online yesterday to look at this after the family celebration stuff started to settle down. Thank you so so much for this absolutely incredible birthday gift!! (I would include a short message of thanks from Hallow too, but unfortunately all she pressed was the "page down" button and the trackpad a bunch of times...) And you did Caspian's little ghost tabby marks! I just saw that!   

I should probably end this comment before it devolves into even more of a rant-based exclamation mush, but I'll just say one more time, [deeeeep breath]

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!!!!!!! Now I only hope I can return the absolutely increadible gift come March. ^^

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Streamwhisker In reply to Snowfall16 [2017-01-27 21:28:09 +0000 UTC]

AHH, I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKE IT!!!
Ahhh, yes, I couldn't resist adding in a little raven! I only really put it in at the last minute, but I'm so glad I did!
(And oh my gosh, those llamas!! AHHHH)
You're absolutely welcome!! It was so much fun to draw! I hope you had a wonderful day!
(Gosh, how rude of Hallow. Honestly, it's like she doesn't even want to talk to me.)
Oh, yes! His ghost tabby markings! I was a little uncertain about how to do them as when I searched "ghost tabby" in google images it came up with mostly black cats with really subtle markings, so I figured if I just did his markings really pale that would count as ghost tabby? I wasn't too sure though! (Wait, why doesn't Phantom have ghost tabby markings???? Gosh, you're really missing out on an amazing opportunity there!)

YOU'RE WELCOME YOU'RE WELCOME YOU'RE WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!  
Gosh, honestly, even if you did nothing for my birthday I would still be delighted thanks to the SUPER EXCITING NEWS of a few days ago! March 2018 can't come quickly enough! (maybe I should acquire a time turner... hmmmm...)

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Snowfall16 In reply to Streamwhisker [2017-01-29 18:33:59 +0000 UTC]



Oh, yeah I searched that too and it seems like it's a bit hard to find ghost tabby stripes. It's odd because I thought I found images of them before! Huh. Well, for future reference, I imagined them as being sort of pointed, like darker at the paws, tail, and face, but then fading away toward the underbelly, chest, and muzzle? But I absolutely love how you did them for him! ^^ I might have to change my imagined design to let him have a few back stripes, since he looks so good as he is here!
XD OH GOSH now I want to change Phantom's design. Humph. Although he is an OC so I wouldn't want to change his design TOO much. Maybe the stripes could fade with time or something to account for my personal one-shot of his eventual home elsewhere... cough SMOKEFOOT JUST SORTA "APPEARED" IN SHADOWCLAN cough

Ha, getting a time turner to see the Cursed Child sooner? XD Good one.

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Streamwhisker In reply to Snowfall16 [2017-02-07 21:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, I'll have to try drawing him like that at some point! Honestly, I want to draw loads of the Avanti tribe; I was going through the allegiances whilst working on this and all of their designs just sound so beautiful!
WHOA
WHOA HOLD ON A SEC
IS PHANTOM SMOKEFOOT?????
  
MAJOR REVELATION, WOW!
THIS IS SO EXCITING!!

xD The irony.

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Snowfall16 In reply to Streamwhisker [2017-02-08 03:37:32 +0000 UTC]

XD We could do like another joint art thing, possibly? OR we could like draw some of them by ourselves? -shrug-

YES YES HE IS. I might write a one-shot eventually but anyway. That's the plan at least!

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Streamwhisker In reply to Snowfall16 [2017-02-08 21:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, yes, we could do that! That would be fun!!

AHHHHHH
I still can't get over that!!! That's so Exciting!!! (so exciting that it gets to be capitalised!)

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Snowfall16 In reply to Snowfall16 [2017-01-27 00:19:53 +0000 UTC]

(I hope you don't mind if I put this on my profile ^^)

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Streamwhisker In reply to Snowfall16 [2017-01-27 21:29:20 +0000 UTC]

(Aw, I'm honoured!!)

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Nightbird1648 [2017-01-25 22:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Woah, this looks absolutely amazing! At first, I thought it was a photo... ^^"
I love how you drew the river, and the aspen trees look stunning, too! The shading and lighting on the mountains look amazing! ;o;

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Streamwhisker In reply to Nightbird1648 [2017-01-26 22:13:58 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, thank you so much!! I'm glad you like the mountains; I was actually going to add more detail to them, I'd kind of coloured them in quite quickly, but I think it looks quite nice being a bit messy, so I ended up leaving it as it was. ^^

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Nightbird1648 In reply to Streamwhisker [2017-01-26 22:14:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem! nwn

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vvindication [2017-01-25 22:07:55 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is beautiful. lovely work!

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Streamwhisker In reply to vvindication [2017-01-26 22:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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