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Stony11 [2017-11-04 01:24:28 +0000 UTC]
omg, I have to say out of all these cats Rabbitleap and Creekfeather are by far my fav! XD especially how they are written I like Rabbitleap's determination to become leader! (although I think Leafstar and Sharpclaw are kind of worried for their lives by this point at how determined he is!) and also his rivalry with Mintfur! XD (I actually think there is some romance in their future, especially when Mintfur told Rabbitleap she's make him her deputy! and in turn Rabbitleap thought she would make a good deputy!) and Creekfeather omg, he just makes me laugh! "I'm your favorite son right?" *Omg, I think he hit his head" but Nettlesplash's lazy personality and obvious hate for the energetic Birdwing is really nice and cute, and Plumwillow's perfect planning is amazing I love her friendship with Honeyfrost and I can see her getting with Sagefoot! XD I would love to see a scene where Plumwillow is mooning over Rockshade from a ledge (like she is above Rockshade who is like eating?) and above her is Sagefoot who is just lazily leaning on a tree branch above her and just staring down at her with obvious interest, like 'What is she doing?' kind of thing! XD I love it!!!!
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Snowfall16 [2017-06-15 03:19:24 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow this is lovely!! ^^ Haha, Nettlesplash would be yawning, wouldn't he? XD And Creekfeather's expression is also loafly!
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Snowfeather4876 [2017-06-10 21:27:49 +0000 UTC]
THAT SMIRK IS ADORABLE! I've actually started reading this, and it's quite amusing. xD
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Streamwhisker In reply to Snowfeather4876 [2017-06-12 20:42:03 +0000 UTC]
YAY! I'm glad you like it! I spent way too long on that smirk trying to make it look vaguely smirk-like.
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