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Published: 2008-06-09 00:48:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 3134; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 28
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YAY.I'M GETTING A LITTLE BETTER AT MAKING DESIGN CHOICES.
Page 15, I promise, I'll post the contest info. I PROMISE PROMISE
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Cover #1: [link]
Page 02: [link]
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DON'T FORGET TO BOOKMARK CTHS AT SMACKJEEVES: [link]
The incentive: As the story progresses, I'll be uploading bonus material there that won't really fit on dA.
...or you can still add me on livejournal: [link]
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Comments: 34
God, Skywarp has such a derp face... I LOVE IT. I also love Starscream's robofreckles!
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I've read this whole comic, but this page is easily my favorite.
Dear lord.
The seeker's expressions in the last panel. XD SO FREAKIN CUTE.
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D: Haven't you, like, redone this pace TWICE already? Sheesh, make up your mind.
FOCUS PILOT. -smacks-
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I HAV NOT
I HAS REDUN OTHER PAEGS
BUT NOT THIS ONE.
ALSO: MY COMIC HAS TO LOOK BEAUTIFUL, DON'T YOU SEEEEE?
(They have to be especially worth the ink too. ;D)
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O definetally. I want my $10 worth.
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Ah, the Scheming Starscream face, it's just so awesome. ^w^
That is quite the wide-eyed blank look Skywarp's got.
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the "here we go again..." or "gee, why am i not suprised" face is awesome!
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This whole comic rocks. Though my favourite part of this page is the smallest -Skywarp's face = hilarious! Unnaturally large, faux innocent smile is fantastic. And of course, loving Screamer's freakles and Skyfire's glasses. What amazing inspiration for those.
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Hehe, thanks a lot!
Glad I've got another fan's worth of support.
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The colors in the 6. panel are especially awesome, they look so intense and nightly and the perspective is cool, too, not to mention Screamers face
And the seeker threesome in the last panel made me laugh
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Hmmm... Makes me wonder about the nightlife with that darkened crowd shot in the first panel. almost looks like Cyclonus, Galvatron, Scourge, and Dreamwave style Ratbat down there... but that would just be silly.
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HAHA, yeah, I was thinking to myself that it looked like they lived above a nightclub. xD
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The style of the recent pages look nothing like it though. :[
And my OCD HAETS inconsistency...
Thank you though. ^^
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Well as long as you keep the old version.
I was so struck by Starscream's youthful, freckled face in the old page, BTW!
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xDDDDD
Oh man, 'struck' is a good word. <3
I will keep it, don't worry.
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Lol, that poor window. XD I love his expression in the fourth panel.
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Love the redo, although the original rocked as well. Nicely done, and the facial expressions are perfect!
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I LUV the way u draw Jetfire!
and Screamer's face while explaining his scheme is just epic XD
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Where he says "Ack!", it looks like he says "AOL!" as a curse in the small view. XD
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Of course, the mere utterance of the abbreviation *should* be a curse.
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Skywarp looks like he's off in his own world in that last panel. Probably coming up with a scheme to push someone down some stairs.
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Oh man, you have no idea. That kid is never 100% there. >>;
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'Course not. He wouldn't grow up to be the Skywarp we all know if he was.
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Hooray! Page re-do! And Starscream continues his trend of having the world's best "we're going to go ruin someone's day" face.
But I noticed that that bubble says that they're going to replace the "paylods" in Sentinel's shoulders with rocks.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
MUST FIX DDDDD:
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