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rhunel [2008-09-16 03:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Featured your fabulous poetry here: [link]

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stryofoamcups In reply to rhunel [2008-09-16 06:45:20 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! I am so flattered!
Thanks so much!!
:$

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rhunel In reply to stryofoamcups [2008-09-16 17:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! Well, it belonged. It portrays as well as a great portrait.

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rhunel [2008-08-16 04:39:00 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!!!

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Desire-Dess [2008-05-13 13:35:16 +0000 UTC]

I love this piece..

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stryofoamcups In reply to Desire-Dess [2008-05-13 16:17:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^_^

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shadowseyez [2007-12-06 22:52:35 +0000 UTC]

o0o0o
i like this one too!

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stryofoamcups In reply to shadowseyez [2007-12-06 23:13:14 +0000 UTC]

hehe
thank you

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busenius [2007-12-06 15:45:10 +0000 UTC]

I never let you know how much I like this piece! Anyhow, I thought you'd like to know that I used it in my adult ESL class last night. It was a sensation!

I had the students read it to themselves and told them there was no right or wrong way to read it. I told them they could jump around and follow it however they wanted. Then I had them make three lists. They made one list of words they didn't know (and then asked me the meaning or looked in the dictionary). They made one list of things they thought defined them. And they made one list of things they thought did not define them. Even the guys in the class were able to find lots of things that defined them and in the end we had great conversation about it. The students had lots of questions and they learned a ton. They also loved it.

So, thanks a million. Your artwork made the class fun.

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stryofoamcups In reply to busenius [2007-12-06 21:58:21 +0000 UTC]

whoa...definitely did not expect that...hehe
that's pretty damned cool...I'm glad I could help ^_^
and I am very flattered that you would consider using my work!

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busenius In reply to stryofoamcups [2007-12-06 23:19:56 +0000 UTC]

No, seriously, thank you. It was a great class. Aside from being a super English lesson, it was really good for the students on a somewhat personal lesson. My students come from a pretty conservative and reserved culture. I think a lot of the things you say in the piece convey similar feelings to what many of my students have, however, they've never been able to vocalize it nor have they heard it vocalized because you generally don't communicate those things in their country (especially not in school). Not to mention that their country is even more male dominated than this country. I think it was empowering for them to hear a lot of that stuff said out loud. They really seemed to enjoy it.

Also, the level of "obscenity" was perfect for an adult class. I mean, quite honestly, that stuff is very important to ESL students because they hear it but sometimes they don't understand it (especially when it's combined with slang). Cussing in English is very complicated and illogical. Christ, there was a whole book written on the word "fuck" because it has so many idiosyncrasies and uses. Though, as a teacher I never want to focus on that stuff too much, it was there for those who wanted it. And believe me they DID want it. So again, THANK YOU!

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stryofoamcups In reply to busenius [2007-12-19 02:27:12 +0000 UTC]

<3

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brisni [2007-11-01 00:31:09 +0000 UTC]

could have done with out the cursing

but well said

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stryofoamcups In reply to brisni [2007-11-01 01:49:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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showna [2007-08-29 21:37:53 +0000 UTC]

this reminds me of my own piece, "I Am Fake"

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Madeleine-dA [2007-08-29 21:14:54 +0000 UTC]

Visual Poetry Deserves Your Love #2

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stryofoamcups In reply to Madeleine-dA [2007-08-31 00:29:16 +0000 UTC]

omg!
Thank you so much, I am flattered
^_^

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Pellavolen [2006-11-16 19:44:23 +0000 UTC]

It's definitely going on my e-shelf.

Thanks, I'm honored, truly.

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stryofoamcups In reply to Pellavolen [2006-11-17 07:10:11 +0000 UTC]

hehe no prob, you earned it

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diesels-luu [2006-11-16 11:01:34 +0000 UTC]

brilliant..i wish i could give this warning before getting into a relationship!
yep, they should know the whole package

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stryofoamcups In reply to diesels-luu [2006-11-16 19:05:50 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha

I made a list once called: "To all future boyfriends: A WARNING".

Oh yes, these would come in handy

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Pellavolen [2006-11-15 15:54:25 +0000 UTC]

I admire your conviction in the power self-discovery. It's so difficult to admit some things.. People's preconceived notions, people and their ignorance. I truly admire a person of your mental-stature; having the ability to admit faults and failures.

I, as a person, am unable to live with who I am. I'm very glad that you're so comfortable in your skin..

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stryofoamcups In reply to Pellavolen [2006-11-16 19:03:59 +0000 UTC]

You get an award for the best comment ever.

Kudos!



and thank you

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Pellavolen [2006-11-15 08:57:23 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Pellavolen [2006-11-14 07:38:57 +0000 UTC]

I could stare at that for an hour and be entirely engrossed in interest. It's excellent! I like the brusque honesty.

Yes, like she said, "it covers much."

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stryofoamcups In reply to Pellavolen [2006-11-15 08:07:22 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank you very much

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bluragazza [2006-11-14 07:20:33 +0000 UTC]

that's absolutely beautiful! i came on dA one last time for i was headed for bed - and i came upon this - it's a lovely piece - goest straight to the point - and covers so much - i really like it a lot
and indeed - it's a perfect confession - one that really comes from the heart

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stryofoamcups In reply to bluragazza [2006-11-15 08:07:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I appreciate your comments and your...appreciation!

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bluragazza In reply to stryofoamcups [2006-11-15 17:58:52 +0000 UTC]

it was truly very nicely written

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stryofoamcups In reply to bluragazza [2006-11-16 19:03:30 +0000 UTC]



I can't wait to do another! hehe

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bluragazza In reply to stryofoamcups [2006-11-16 22:18:08 +0000 UTC]

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