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StyrbjornAndersson — Sisters love sketch (WiP)
Published: 2013-01-19 16:06:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 4620; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 308
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This is the first sketch of this weekends picture project. I'll see if I can muster the motivation to do the lineart today, or if I'll just watch a movie instead
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Your welcome. Hey one of your hair tutorial gave me an idea
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The girl getting splashed, and you probably know this, but you need to fix her arms
They don't look like they're part of her.
I would also have that girl in the back react with the two in the front...
whether it be looking at them with a smile to show the playfulness of the picture, or just showing an interest.
She looks uninterested and she doesn't make sense standing there.
Other then that I think the angles and execution are very nice.
I realize this is just a sketch, but I can see something good going on here and the water will be awesome to work in there.
The structures of the bodies and face are drawn very well and I see that you're using your expressions challenge in this pic.
Great job and I can hardly wait to see what you come up with in the final version.
Your work is amazing, so keep working hard! ^__^
I hope I didn't over critique. I don't want you thinking that I'm being picky or something like that.
I'm just honestly trying to help!
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I am probably not going to finish this - at least not now. There is to much that needs fixing, those things you mentioned being some of them
The basic idea was to create a picture where the camera is semi submerged under water, but I honestly think I need more practice before I can create decent multi character scenes. That'll be tomorrow though - I feel a bit off today -.-
Thanks for taking the time to give good critique. I really appreciate it
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