Comments: 235
JeffxReaderfan [2018-12-14 15:36:33 +0000 UTC]
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if I walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I don't want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I don't like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they love u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u don't post this to 5 other comments... You will have bad luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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CrazedFandomFreak In reply to JeffxReaderfan [2019-05-06 09:53:10 +0000 UTC]
According to comments like these, I should've died 13 times, been stabbed 32 times, been kidnapped and/or torched 57 times, have no love experience, will never kiss anyone, make my family hate me for some vile act 8 times, and have at least 140 years of bad luck in relationships.
And yet here I am, not dead but mentaly dying.
Someone kill me plz
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XxxSugaxxX [2018-10-30 21:52:19 +0000 UTC]
ME too!! i've read so many and decided to write one but its 2018 now lol
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TheDemonGirl84 In reply to Thatbehindthatmask [2018-03-04 04:41:08 +0000 UTC]
Alright smartass. Answer me this; if you don’t like Jeff The Killer, then why did you post this on an X-READER ABOUT HIM? Why not post it on YOUR DA page, where YOUR watchers who may/may not agree with you can hear what you have to say?! I personally think his story is awesome; no single person can change that opinion of mine. But please, if you’re going to post this kind of shit, don’t post it on the story of a Creepypasta fan. It only makes you seem like a dick.
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OrbusArt [2018-01-13 17:05:00 +0000 UTC]
Y/n = WarringState
L/n = Orbus
F/r = -= (Ichi Ni)
F/s = Stealing Society by System of a Down
F/c = Jet Black
F/f = Sukiyaki
F/d = Green tea (Ly Japan <3)
THIS IS HOW THE STORY PLAYS OUT NOW!
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Bendy-Rose [2018-01-12 01:17:16 +0000 UTC]
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if I walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I don't want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I don't like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they love u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u don't post this to 5 other comments... You will have bad luck in relationships for the next 10 years
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
inspxired [2018-01-05 18:42:52 +0000 UTC]
ThIs Is Gr8 but can you please make a longer version? huehue sowwi i reallly like reading. Keep up the good work and im your new watcher!!
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UnknownSoul0o0 [2017-12-12 17:40:14 +0000 UTC]
Dis butifool. (Spelling mistakes intended XD)
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PrismaCreator [2017-08-03 09:00:04 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm, but if she was that good at fighting why would she need...? Whatever, good short story anyways. Could be better with multiple more detailed chapters.
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ShadowZoroark21 [2017-06-11 16:14:41 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, but I lost my place a lot because it was all in a few giant paragraphs. Otherwise, nice job.
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Pricklepaints [2017-05-20 03:01:04 +0000 UTC]
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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Calla-Ren [2017-04-14 21:16:25 +0000 UTC]
I will ............. hm.......... I don't know
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GrystinaTheKiller [2017-01-11 06:24:39 +0000 UTC]
what happens? hmmmmmm............ I GO KILLING WITH JEFF AND MY 70 CENTIMETRE KNIFE X3
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LillicaKirishima In reply to GrystinaTheKiller [2019-03-08 21:08:04 +0000 UTC]
Lilly:how many people did you kill?we could be partners in crime and killing if ya want
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LillicaKirishima In reply to GrystinaTheKiller [2019-03-12 00:47:26 +0000 UTC]
Lilly:*kinda activates my quirk only a little bit* I am now Katsuki Kacchan Bakugou
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ShadowXLoki [2017-01-01 10:22:36 +0000 UTC]
well umm ok
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TheDragonCupcake [2016-11-20 23:06:57 +0000 UTC]
i love this and isn't your icon the 2nd Springtrap model from FNAF 3?
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KawaiiGirlLover [2016-07-08 15:26:33 +0000 UTC]
I love it its awesome how did you make it though?
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Subsquentual In reply to KawaiiGirlLover [2016-07-08 17:26:18 +0000 UTC]
Make what? The story? I just thought it up one day on my way home, and wrote it down :3
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manglethebestfoxever [2016-06-12 21:06:05 +0000 UTC]
You what's funny is that my last day of school is a half day and I half to walk home. I love the story keep up the good work.
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musicmaker12354 [2016-04-07 19:49:26 +0000 UTC]
so sweet and bloody. i love gore. also look me up on wattpad
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hippo35 [2016-03-28 23:15:41 +0000 UTC]
And then he killed me because he's a fucking killer xD
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ladyblackbird13 [2016-03-01 19:36:19 +0000 UTC]
Nice...I like that lass.
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bepupss [2015-12-24 07:40:16 +0000 UTC]
This made my day, by the way, great job, I don't care about the quality, as long as its good and makes me smile, which it did, gets 10/10! Thanks for making my day! Well, night! x'D
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minecraftian216 [2015-12-02 19:59:22 +0000 UTC]
PPCing this now.
Charge list: "Being a second person abomination, lack of paragraph spacing and indentation, capitalization errors, walls of text when those are psychologically proven to be near-impossible to read, Sueifying the character of Jeff the Killer, unrealistic death speed, 'love at first sight' crud, and annoying Agents Void and Chrome."
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tokoroth-of-chaos In reply to minecraftian216 [2016-02-08 19:48:22 +0000 UTC]
Is there a mission report up somewhere to go with this charge list? Because I would honestly love to read it.
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Lilpoeghostie [2015-11-12 22:40:47 +0000 UTC]
Good job man. I liked it. I'll check out your other fanfics.
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Elaina-Cartman In reply to Subsquentual [2016-10-16 04:19:22 +0000 UTC]
1 love ur icon fnaf
2 'man' can be a figure of speech
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Bundthead [2015-10-20 06:18:42 +0000 UTC]
I literally said "wooow you fucking bitch." When it said that what happened next was up to me. xD
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Angelthewolve [2015-10-17 14:27:11 +0000 UTC]
MOM, DAD!!! JEZZZZ!! I NEED SOME AIR!! IM NOT A BABY ANYMORE!!!!
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horseluv13 [2015-09-13 21:46:34 +0000 UTC]
it was really amazing lolz
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horseluv13 [2015-09-13 21:46:01 +0000 UTC]
u should add more to it lolz just a little advice
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3mo-freak [2015-08-02 16:48:38 +0000 UTC]
It was so gooooodd!!
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ChickieBruh [2015-07-31 04:05:46 +0000 UTC]
Dawwwwwww. that was awesome for Jeffie!
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