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successwithhonor — kenai
Published: 2019-08-19 14:18:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 487; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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Description here it is always dusk. the july air is a thick blanket of mosquitos. blueberries blister from the earth. salmonberries taste like sugar water and childhood. we call those orbed guords watermelon berries, for obvious reasons. whittier is a sleepy relic of the cold war. rumor has it there is an underground tunnel veining its way to girdwood. rumor has it that it closed after the ghost of a boy descended and never returned. the moose, with their tired knees, cannot make the steep mountain descent.  here it is cold in the way only summers can be:  wet. a moving stream, glaciermelt, something both ending and beginning again. a westfalia: rustorange, beadseated, putters like a heavy chest. ribbons its way through the longest highway tunnel in north america.  i watch the marbled sun disappear behind the ringstain of mountains, a long shadow called night. here i have brought all my baggage: kerouac and ivory coated dreams. here i learn how to peel shrimp. love a girl who loves another boy across a whole sea.  i mean that each day the sky shows me a new kind of grey. i mean that there are infinite ways to use our hands.  i mean that we can still be full of emptiness.
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squibblyquill [2020-04-01 13:54:01 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem a lot. Favorite line: "here it is cold in the way only summers can be:  wet. a moving stream, glaciermelt, something both ending and beginning again." I do not like Kerouac, but I like the nature-language here.

Random aside, this also tagged an inane memory when I once posted a paragraph as a poem on DA years ago. And people tried to tell me it was NOT a poem. And I felt talked down to. Seing your poem, clearly a poem, in paragraph form, incidentally offers some measure of vindication.

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successwithhonor In reply to squibblyquill [2020-04-02 08:46:00 +0000 UTC]

a poem is a poem is a poem

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squibblyquill In reply to successwithhonor [2020-04-04 02:21:59 +0000 UTC]

: ) indeed

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septemberboyfriend [2019-09-11 21:09:37 +0000 UTC]

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oviedomedina [2019-09-08 03:20:50 +0000 UTC]

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beeswingblue [2019-08-19 19:28:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm thinking the first part is a little choppy, maybe deliberately so? It picks up steam midway, and the last third is especially powerful. A lot of strong images here. Most evocative for me are the salmonberries; we'd go on hikes with our parents, when I was a kid, and my favorite thing was to pluck them and pop them into my mouth. Things were simpler then -- or maybe not? Who's to say. But they definitely speak to me of childhood. I really like this.

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muscularteeth [2019-08-19 14:26:26 +0000 UTC]

pennsylvania? 

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successwithhonor In reply to muscularteeth [2019-08-19 14:28:02 +0000 UTC]

alaska o.0

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muscularteeth In reply to successwithhonor [2019-08-19 14:30:41 +0000 UTC]

ope i was thinking of the tunnels carved through the mountains there.

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