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squibblyquill [2020-04-01 13:54:01 +0000 UTC]
I like this poem a lot. Favorite line: "here it is cold in the way only summers can be: wet. a moving stream, glaciermelt, something both ending and beginning again." I do not like Kerouac, but I like the nature-language here.
Random aside, this also tagged an inane memory when I once posted a paragraph as a poem on DA years ago. And people tried to tell me it was NOT a poem. And I felt talked down to. Seing your poem, clearly a poem, in paragraph form, incidentally offers some measure of vindication.
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muscularteeth [2019-08-19 14:26:26 +0000 UTC]
pennsylvania?
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muscularteeth In reply to successwithhonor [2019-08-19 14:30:41 +0000 UTC]
ope i was thinking of the tunnels carved through the mountains there.
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