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Published: 2011-06-02 20:12:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 8709; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 146
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So here is page 2 :3Cover -> [link]
page 1 -> [link]
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- Genres: Humor, Slice of live, Shonen-ai, Shojo-ai
- Paarings: Vegeta x Goku, Bulma x Chichi
- As you know, english isn't my mother tongue.Feel free to correct me.
- Page edited 3/6/11
- japanese reading direction (that means from right to left XD)
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HERRY THE HECK UP WITH THE NEXT PAGES PLEEEEEAASE!!!!!!!!!!
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hey tut mir leid, Sie zu stΓΆren, aber lassen Sie mich wissen, wenn es mehr erhalten?
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Aaaaaww goku has a cute face on the bottom left one where's he's like ?
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This is uber cute XD can't wait for the next pages!!
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Love the style of art, I cannot wait to see another page
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Poor clueless Goku. XP. I really love how you do the shine in his hair~
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XD Thanks. On this page I have changed my Goku-hair-color-technique (a simpler way, with the same effect).I'm glad that no one sees a difference. XDD
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LOL, THAT POOR SPOON! 
Oh no~ How can Goku not know about Valentines Day? ...xD Actually, I'd expect no less from him.
Another brilliant page! With all the expressions and awesome backgrounds, it's so fun to look at.
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GO GO GO.
Its coming out really well and i cant wait to see more.
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You don't have to make these changes, but this is how a few of these would more normally be said:
"Why can't I try a cookie?"
"For Valentine's Day! Got it?"
"You're kidding me, right? Please tell me that you're kidding me!"
Um.. I'm not sure about the last Bulma one. I've never heard anyone say "I'll be blowed." but after that it makes more sense to say, "You really have no idea!".
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aw 
Like "I'll be blowed." Found here [link]
btw~ its a great help :3
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"I'll be damned" is probably the best substitute.
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Thanks 
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Awwwwww~ ich liebe es!!
So tolle Farben, so sΓΌΓe Ideen und beide Charas sehen wieder so klasse aus!
Kann momentan leider nicht mehr schreiben, aber wenigstens, dass ich voll gespannt bin noch viel mehr Doujiseiten von dir zu sehen!<333
Weiter so~ ;D
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Sollst du so spΓ€t noch wach sein???? >D Geh lernen!
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