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Published: 2004-04-12 01:47:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 49; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 16
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The sun was downThe moon was high
Stars were bright
She gave a sigh
Her lips were pink
As were her cheeks
This hadn't happened
In countless weeks
But here he stood
His heart devout
She loved him so
Without a doubt
Now hands clenched
Her eyes ablaze
She leaned in towards
His haunting gaze
Just inches close
She breathed in deep
Her eyes gave his
A gentle sweep
"I love you dear
I thought you'd gone
Cuz' you left me gifts
On my new lawn.
But here you stand
Your tongue adrool
Holy crap!
More friggin' stool?"
How much there was
Her cheeks now red
Her anger geat
Her dog was dead
But he stood firm
His eyes in mirth
He's the greatest dog
In all the earth
My Chance
Comments: 1
its kool that u took up freeverse for once... if it isnt... it kinda looks like it lol... i really like this peice!
I like ur lil darker spin
Great Work
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