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Published: 2008-07-25 00:28:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 28303; Favourites: 1633; Downloads: 894
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I'm having too much fun making these
I don't really have much to say about this one except that the one thing that bothers me is the castle. Maybe it's the lighting, or I'm just over-analyzing it. If you see the problem with it, point it out so I can fix it! I think everything else is fine...or at least ok.
Stock Used:
Model: [link]
Background:
Castle part one: [link]
Castle part two: [link]
Bird brushes: [link]
Lantern: [link]
FULL VIEW PLEASE!
EDIT: Fixed the castle, made it into more of a silhouette. Hopefully it looks better!
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Comments: 183
Would you consider using this as a book cover?? I am eventually offering payment if yours is chosen for one in my trilogy
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Hi great picture! I was wondering if I can use this as my cover for wattpad please. I will also give credit to you, so please if I can use it because agian it looks wonderful.
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I love this!
I was wondering if I could use this as a cover of my story on Wattpad.
Is it okay?
Here's the story I made. [link]
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I love this picture!
I was wondering if I could use this as a book cover of my story on Wattpad.
Is it okay?
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I love it! The way that conveys emotion captivates me. Ultimately will be to favorites
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I have spotted your problem, the light on the castle needs to be a bit stronger, and in more appropriate places, remember, the structures of the castle must also cast their own shadows...
Also, the castle is way off in the distance yet its VERY detailed, why is this?
you need to add some gaussian blur to the castle to make it seem more distant...
The perspective is a little off too but you cant do anything about that except make it smaller and settle for a line of vision...
other than that, this is pretty impressive work
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I think you do a great work. Good use of the light in te art.
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Splenderific! I love faestock and manips in general and this is exceptional!
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wow. the castle and the contrast and the lightning (around that area) are my favorite parts.
great job!
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That's really pretty, I could write a story about it
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You really want me to, I could write a short story for ya. Though I'd have to ask you to read one of my stories to see if you like them
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Ok, which one would you like me to read?
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Well there are several on my page, one of my favorite is a seven part series called trial, not to long, but I think you could read either fifth or seventh part of that, or Time of Warriors and Swords. Those would probably be best.
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Ok, I will go read those
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I don't know how you make these, but this one's gorgeous, and kinda spooky too.
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the casle does look a bit like it shouldn't be there but it add's to the spooky effect.
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You've outdon yourself this time.
This is wonderful.
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I love the way your pictures are so beautiful and realistic, yet very dreamy... they almost look like drawings! xD
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the castle doesnt look straght but its probably me i have a problem with everything it its not straight even by a tiny bit but its good and its not the lighting i like the water a lot and the lighting on the model
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hey i think i know whats wrong with this art work if you looked at the birds and compared them to the castle size you will find ..... that it is just not right ? don,t you think so(the bird,s are realy big!..) every thing else look,s ok i like it.
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Hello. 
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I don't see a problem with it- I really like it. I notice the quiet lantern in these pictures- does it belong to the girl? Does she have a story?
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Really cool! Maybe the castle should be slightly higher and to the left a little more? It might just be that the placement feels slightly off....It looks really cool though^^~
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That is a very beautiful piece of work. Everything really blends together.
Great job! 
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Oh my goshess its simply wonderfull,nice work!
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o.0!!! this is SO FREAKING KOOL!!! >< you do the bEST work i have SEEN!!! and how the FREAK do you do it?! lol could you make a turoial on it? like how to get it like this?! i love it SO much!!! <2
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i think what was bugging you about the castle was that it seemed kinda like a block like there were no wavesof the ocean crashing onto it and well yah...but otherwise it looks pretty *SPARKLE* *SPARKLE*
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Since it's supposed to be so far away, maybe the castle should be a bit out of focus? Since the woman in the foreground is the main thing that your eye is drawn toward.
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i love the blue of the sky, and that lamp! great job
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you always make the most amazing art!! Love it!!
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