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Published: 2007-12-21 04:47:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 556; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 23
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Description my contest entry for

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"Forever a blood shot..."

As a young pup, Bloodshot was the middle of his litter and one of the strongest, but his mind was not very stable. Things he saw that scared him, sent him into a blind furry of siezeurs and in the worst case, combat with the item of his unstability.
On one such occasion, his eldest brother, Sharpsight, had caught a little bird, killing it. Young Bloodshot had been admiring the lovely birds gently movements, then his brother lept, snapping the little birdies neck. Bloodshot's eye widened in terror, and his unstable mind could not comprehend that the bird was a means of food. Blindly, Bloodshot started to hate his brother, till the hate became a furry in which he lashed out in a bullet-quick movement. Without knowing, he had latched himself onto his older brother, and had slicked his head off, like his brother had done to the bird.
When Bloodshot had gained a realisim of what he had just done, he stared in horror. Seizeur upon seizeur tore him apart, and he fled in blind agony.
Since then, his mind has become more stable, yet he still runns from his past, forever a murderous blood shot.

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Hope ya like it! ^^

image © to me, Kira McLachlin, aka
character (Bloodshot) © to
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Comments: 20

woofiedog4 [2007-12-21 21:02:36 +0000 UTC]

That's so sad! D:
But so awesome. >D
His scared expression and the running pose go nicely together. -cuddles him-

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Sun-wing In reply to woofiedog4 [2007-12-22 04:21:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^ very much appreciated ^^ and yes, you can hug him... i think?

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wolf-fang30 [2007-12-21 15:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Fantastically drawen!

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Sun-wing In reply to wolf-fang30 [2007-12-22 04:26:21 +0000 UTC]

thanxies

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wolf-fang30 In reply to Sun-wing [2007-12-22 15:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Np buddeh!

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Sun-wing In reply to wolf-fang30 [2007-12-24 02:25:56 +0000 UTC]

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WolfPhantom16 [2007-12-21 13:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow! As iamPURPLE said, you may just be the closest to his story so far. I just have to add that his older brother's name is Xarl. But, otherwise, you did a magnificent job. Best wishes and good luck in the contest!

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Sun-wing In reply to WolfPhantom16 [2007-12-22 04:28:20 +0000 UTC]

oh, oops! D: i'd better put that in, heh..heh... lol
but thank you very much ^^ are you in the contest as well? if so, good luc to you too!

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WolfPhantom16 In reply to Sun-wing [2007-12-22 12:35:59 +0000 UTC]

No problem. ^__^ No. I'm the judge.

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Sun-wing In reply to WolfPhantom16 [2007-12-24 02:28:34 +0000 UTC]

oh really! well, hi! lol naw, have fun with it

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WolfPhantom16 In reply to Sun-wing [2007-12-24 12:26:49 +0000 UTC]

Hey-lo. xD Okey-dokey. I'll be the nicest judge I can be.

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Sun-wing In reply to WolfPhantom16 [2007-12-31 02:54:20 +0000 UTC]

lol ^^

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iamPURPLE [2007-12-21 12:51:02 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! Nice job! This is permanent love!
Thanks so much. Bloodshot looked adorable, I say. Just, awesome!
The story is very different from the other entries, but I never said it wasn't far from mine. In fact, this may be one of the closest you have to his past (even if we're judging on creativity). I can say this has a whole lot of that!
Poses, expression, the background- you certainly know how to make an entry. And the quote there is amazing.
Good luck in the contest.

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Sun-wing In reply to iamPURPLE [2007-12-22 04:29:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^ have fun judging!
and I just saw that his older brother is named Xarl. do you want me to switch it?

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iamPURPLE In reply to Sun-wing [2007-12-22 14:45:03 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't matter. It never said on the sheet that Xarl was his older brother, by the way; it said it was his brother.
Either way, you may use that name and it could be substituted for any real names that may be on there- no penalty or anything. It's an art and creativity contest, after all.

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Sun-wing In reply to iamPURPLE [2007-12-24 02:26:52 +0000 UTC]

oh, thank you ^^ lol, i;ll keep that in mind next time though! lol

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FFRedXIII [2007-12-21 10:41:47 +0000 UTC]

nice, the story, everything, nice!

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Sun-wing In reply to FFRedXIII [2007-12-22 04:30:30 +0000 UTC]

thanx reddie

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FFRedXIII In reply to Sun-wing [2007-12-22 13:16:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem, Sunny.

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Sun-wing In reply to FFRedXIII [2007-12-24 02:28:01 +0000 UTC]

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