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Randoxide [2020-08-20 12:04:21 +0000 UTC]
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DrizDew [2020-06-25 10:42:16 +0000 UTC]
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MrRemoraman [2020-04-19 21:31:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow, your dialogue REALLY shines here! I love how we see more and more into Adelais' relationship with NIcky. Their mom is strict, but even THAT has its advantages. Her advice IS TRUE: sometimes, you just have to use your instincts and trust for yourself. Its interesting that as controlling as Adelais can be, her ultimate advice is for Nicky to trust herself. The arc comes full-circle. This REALLY is the perfect flashback: it isn't just plot filler, but actually closes the loop and brings the current circumstances into the alignment with the past and what we, the reader, already suspect. It actually heralds the conclusion to TWO conflicts: Nicky and her mother and NIcky and Dark Nicky. Man, I LOVE this comic so much, but I'm SOOOOO looking forward to how this conflict ends!
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SunlessRose In reply to MrRemoraman [2020-04-19 22:48:50 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank you so much, that's really great to hear. I've been working extra hard on the dialog in this part because it's so important for this final fight, ya know? ^^
Exactly! She's not one to coddle or sugarcoat things. That's not even her trying to be a "mom" That's just how she. And that's true too. It can be so hard to trust yourself. Like, you THINK you'll know what to do when a situation arises but your instincts will say otherwise. And that also folds into what Nicolette is going through with Dark Nic.
And that's what she's trying to instill too. It might be a tad cliche but it does boil down to just believing and trusting yourself.
I hate plot filler as do many people so I do my best to avoid that And I'm glad I did that! Thank you so much~
It's funny because Nicolette WAS supposed to have a very tumultuous with Adelais but even thought that's not the case anymore...It still makes sense oddly enough. Lol
I really can't tell you how much that means to me, thank you! And don't worry, there's still plenty left! And we'll still be seeing some familiar faces in Inheritance
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MrRemoraman In reply to SunlessRose [2020-04-19 22:52:50 +0000 UTC]
I like the shojo style of Black Rose, but there's no Day at the Beach episodes, or "Lets stop the tournament so we can go into a virtual reality world" arcs or anything: the plot knocks along, and EVERYTHING is relevant. You have a lot of maturity as a writer to juggle SO MANY characters and keep everything organized and moving so fast!
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SunlessRose In reply to MrRemoraman [2020-04-19 23:26:30 +0000 UTC]
I appreciate that! It took me so long to settle into a style and I feel like I'm still refining it, ya know?
But definitely nothing so cliche Even though I can be a sucker for those kinds of shows, not gonna lie...But I'd still rather make something different lol
Oh my gosh that's so important to me! I don't want anything to NOT have a meaning ya know? It makes things more interesting.
Ahhh! Thank you so much! So much praise~ >3< I'm surprised I got everything so organized considering how it started ya know?
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Captain-Plunder [2020-04-19 10:20:28 +0000 UTC]
The dialogue is great! And the final panel made me smile : - )) Nicky's reaction is priceless here : - ) I guess we are going to see her survival instincts in use soon enough : - ) But I like this flashback very much! And the close-up of her mother's eyes look impressive!
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SunlessRose In reply to Captain-Plunder [2020-04-19 14:13:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I appreciate it! I'm glad it did ^_^
I thought it was pretty funny too lol XD
We will indeed and she even surprises herself which is cool~ Thanks so much!
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WhiteMageHealer [2020-04-17 03:38:55 +0000 UTC]
LOL I love the vast amount of dialogue here between these two characters, it all seems so realistic! Also, I love how you incorporated Adelies wedding ring in this! Most artiest would forget that detail on their own ocs that their married and I love how its here and its wonderful~! Also, second panel and last panel are my favorites sides of seeing mama Adelies~ She looks so gorgeous~! LOL that panel where she looks all dark and serious but, gives the most basic answer lolXD Perfection~!
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SunlessRose In reply to WhiteMageHealer [2020-04-17 15:50:22 +0000 UTC]
Haha thanks a ton! I know it's a lot of dialog but it's super important but I'm glad you like it~ >3<
It's on the wrong hand for it to be her wedding ring but my intentions were there, I swear! Lol but yeah, I love adding little details like that because they are so easy to forget. >.< And it's always nice to see other artists doing the same ^^
Thank you so much! She's always so fun to draw And while her answers are simple and basic, they're very true~
Wahh! You're so wonderful I can't even~ ;3;
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WhiteMageHealer In reply to SunlessRose [2020-04-19 20:51:10 +0000 UTC]
Hey sometimes you need alot of dialogue in order to convey the message~! And the message is very clear right here and I love it~
LOL is it the wrong hand?XD I always get confused when it comes to hand gestures but, I get that you fully intended to show the ring and I love it~ Yeah they really are but, you gotta try and remember that they are thier on the character and its little details like that are amazing~ Right? Love the artwork as always and the attention to detail~
Your welcome dear as always~! I bet she isXD That is ture but, its awesome how she gives her answer~!XD
Nahh, thank you but, I mean it~ Keep up the good work
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