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AsteriaSinclair [2012-03-07 04:48:47 +0000 UTC]
This is completely worthy!
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Hiland-Rose [2012-03-07 03:37:17 +0000 UTC]
You captured that intimacy between mother and child, for three generations, so beautifully.. That fleeting time that is shared, a secret, maybe to the rest of the world.. a very powerful connection...goregeous phrasing.
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sunshinegypsy In reply to Hiland-Rose [2012-03-07 04:09:06 +0000 UTC]
Oh thank you so much. It is such a powerful bond. I still call her up regularly to say "You felt this with me!" or "You did this with me!" NOW I understand. Now I understand how much she really loves me. You just can't know until you stand there and think, "OH WOW." And just as amazing as that little flutter of life I made was the fact that I had someone else who loved ME that much. Powerful stuff. I'm glad you read and enjoyed.
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AngelJasiel [2012-03-06 22:40:03 +0000 UTC]
so beautiful!!!
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ArTisTPeaCe [2012-03-06 21:54:38 +0000 UTC]
very beautiful poem
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Griffkat In reply to sunshinegypsy [2012-03-06 20:36:45 +0000 UTC]
No problem at all! It's one of my favorites as well, no matter how many times I listen to it, it always brings a tear to my eye lol
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asphaltgirl [2012-03-06 19:38:32 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous!
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BlazeMarie865 [2012-03-06 18:59:16 +0000 UTC]
very good poem
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childwoman [2012-03-06 15:41:44 +0000 UTC]
Lovely, tender words.
(and a side note: the original song is by a Swedish group called The Knife - it's worth a listen)
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