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that1otherguy0824 [2013-05-17 20:15:03 +0000 UTC]
Really looking forward to chapter 4!
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foolyguy [2013-05-16 07:42:05 +0000 UTC]
Comic book cover vibe eh? Well I would say you definitely succeeded than~ Offers a great 'pull-in' and dynamically striking art & even gives us a slight preview to the actual story contained within. All very strong points when addressing the cover to any work.
My only criticism stems that the title art should not be in half shadow like that I feel. Especially in this series still very early lifespan where the title logo isn't clearly connected/known Instead I would make all the font all the shade of white, especially since at a glance I think readers can actually misread the front & read this as nAiZ.
I really do love this piece though & think the way you integrated the font into the environment is an excellent touch. I am really blown away by your work lately & can't wait to see what else you do with both MAiZ & your other endeavors.
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SupaCrikeyDave In reply to foolyguy [2013-05-16 09:25:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Fooly!
And yeah, I can see what you mean. Thought it would be cool to have the logo have covered in shadow, but I guess it is lost a bit.
Cheers for the feedback!
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