Nysrina [2017-11-21 09:31:41 +0000 UTC]
Nice! I do like the shading of her face. May I suggest something? Her choker/neck ornament looks painted onto her skin. If that isn't your intention, perhaps you could try giving it volume, draw a double-line where you can see from top of it and away from the neck at the sides to show it is another object on the neck.
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Supatsu In reply to Nysrina [2017-11-22 02:13:53 +0000 UTC]
;__; i can't thank you enough for the critique, I LOVE getting critique because it always helps me improve which is my end goal here. I actually just threw it on at the last minute and didn't give it much mind, but I see what you mean- it's like a collar lol. I needed to give it more depth, so there's always next time This whole people drawing thing is hard, and I've been avoiding it for so long lmao
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