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Published: 2012-04-21 12:35:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 5027; Favourites: 161; Downloads: 26
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Description John looked up from his book, staring at his wall, frowning. He glanced at the clock - it was almost midnight.
Then his phone buzzed softly. Leaning forward he scooped it up and opened up the message.
'Can you let me in? He did it again. -SH'
John felt cold rage sweep through him. The almost-18-year-old had had to treat his schoolfriend before when
he had shown up on his doorstep with a horrible scrape down his back from his father throwing him
into a wall. Sherlock had known - he always knew - that John wanted to be a doctor, and from there they'd
grown into fairly close friends.

He tiptoed down the stairs, glancing at his sister's room. His parents were away for the weekend, but Harrie
was still here, so he had to be careful. He opened the door and couldn't stop himself from taking a shallow gasp
at what he saw. Sherlock laughed wheezily - "That bad, huh?"
The lanky fifteen year old was leaning on the doorframe, unable to support his weight. He wore a white shirt, dark
jeans; the white shirt spotted with blood. His arm was wrapped around his ribs and his feet were bare, covered
in mud and cuts. That wasn't what had caused the gasp, though.

Sherlock's lip was swollen and had split on the left side; above that, on his cheekbones, was a rapidly building,
horribly dark in the centre and mottled over the edges. It looked like it would swell his eye shut if he continued.
Numbly, John nodded, then noticed the young boy's waver. He moved forward to wrap his arms around him so Sherlock
wouldn't fall, but got a choked gasp of pain in response as he led him in and sat him on the sofa. "Christ, Sherlock."
he murmured, angry at the tremor in his voice but more angry at Gladstone Holmes. Sherlock swallowed, leaning forward,
breathing harshly as he clutched himself.

"Sherlock..." John bit his lip then changed his mind. He dashed off to the bathroom, grabbing the little medical
kit his family kept, and a flannel, soaking it. He crouched next to Sherlock and gently dabbed the blood away from
his lip, ignoring the little wince in return. His hair - longer, less curly than it would end up being - had bits of
twig and debris in it. That explained his feet. When he was sure that the cut was clean and not bleeding, John gently
cleaned his feet as well, before shoving the flannel in the wash. When he came back, though, he was caught off guard
as Sherlock was undoing his top.

"What're you..." he broke off as he saw the bruise hidden under his clothing, unintentionally covering his mouth in
horror. "Oh my god." the bruise was massive on his lithe ribs. It started a few inches below his shoulder and covered
the length of his ribs, a darkening bruise, deep red where knuckles had struck and purple rapidly spreading around,
already half-covering the area he could see. "What the hell happened?" he was surprised by the cold in his voice.
"He hit me. Obviously." John bit back any words he could've said as Sherlock began to laugh, each breath a wheeze.

Then he began to cough, trembling, clutching himself again. John crouched in front of him. "You idiot." he mumbled,
of course not meaning it. Tears began to run and it was only then that John clicked just how much pain he was in.
But a more pressing concern was coming up. He was still coughing, harsh, grating noises that could've woken even Harrie,
not that John cared about that right now. There came a horrible hacking sound from his throat, like bits of bones
rubbing together. He clenched his eyes shut as a thick blot of red appeared on his lips, making John feel like he'd been
plunged into ice cold water. 'No. No, Sherlock, no-' he thought desperately, as he held his hand up to Sherlock's face,
not knowing what to do. Gasping for air, Sherlock made that terrifying noise again and another thick strand came out,
dripping. John could feel it on his fingers but he didn't care.

"I'm calling the hospital-" "No!" Sherlock's gasp was rough, desperate, as he grabbed John's wrist. John tugged away
from the weak fifteen year old. "I don't care." he whispered. "I'm not watching you die."

Written by ~Lemonade4Jessa or on tumblr: [link]

We actually sorta wrote this through an RP on omegle... then we were like.. "OMG WE SHOULD BE FRIENDS." So she wonderfully rewrote our RPing into a little short ficlet whilst I drew along with it.

So YEAH!

Reblog here: [link]
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Comments: 69

rababco [2013-03-20 23:51:04 +0000 UTC]

What an amazing little story! I want to find out what happens next! The picture is so dark and emotional too. It sounds like he punctured a lung (the rib could've broke/fractured and pierced the lung I think) The idea of Sherlock's father being abusive is interesting, it might be why Sherlock and his brother never talk about their parents.

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pegasistah [2013-02-10 05:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodness, I love this ESPECIALLY the drawing. So amazing, and THE FEELS D:

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DeadTwinsPersonality [2013-02-09 10:11:14 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much it's probably unhealthy!!!!!!!!!!

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LightningstripeDFTBA [2012-10-22 01:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Nope nope nope fEELS

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iDance [2012-09-17 12:49:44 +0000 UTC]

oh god the feels! D:

this is wonderful though <3

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OpticalWonders [2012-08-21 10:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, it's so sad D: Poor Sherlock, thank god he have John!!

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Neckomewmew [2012-08-13 19:54:58 +0000 UTC]

This is so saaaaad...

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9thShadeOfBlue [2012-07-12 05:57:27 +0000 UTC]

I love it! The only thing I would suggest you change is when Sherlock laughs and says "That bad, huh?" It seems very out of character. After having been bashed - in such a way that he couldn't fight back and was broken to the point of needing an ambulance - I'd expect him to be all delirious, but still completely and seriously assured that he's fine, like in A Scandal In Belgravia after he's been drugged. "Why would I need you?" That kind of thing. But who am I to suggest how to write a story? ;] This is wonderful. Well done!

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superfizz In reply to 9thShadeOfBlue [2012-07-30 00:59:53 +0000 UTC]

Shall pass that onto ~Lemonade4Jessa

Thank you!

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9thShadeOfBlue In reply to superfizz [2012-08-05 05:47:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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TheLouiseWhalen [2012-06-22 06:37:59 +0000 UTC]

And then I cried. Happy?

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superfizz In reply to TheLouiseWhalen [2012-06-22 11:29:41 +0000 UTC]

I'M SORRY!

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TheLouiseWhalen In reply to superfizz [2012-06-22 15:21:44 +0000 UTC]

It's okay <3 The story was brilliant.

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Maximusfart [2012-04-23 21:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Aww I've done my fair share of Omegles like this but this is just

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superfizz In reply to Maximusfart [2012-04-25 03:19:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm addicted to angst... what can I say?

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Rubicon-art In reply to superfizz [2012-04-25 03:35:01 +0000 UTC]

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Lauren140 [2012-04-23 13:28:40 +0000 UTC]

This is adorable omg. I wish it was longer. <3

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superfizz In reply to Lauren140 [2012-04-25 03:20:51 +0000 UTC]

You never know. Part 2 could be a possibility?

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Lauren140 In reply to superfizz [2012-04-25 15:05:28 +0000 UTC]

You should do a Part 2!

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superfizz In reply to Lauren140 [2012-04-25 15:19:36 +0000 UTC]

We are! In fact it'll probably be posted tomorrow

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Lauren140 In reply to superfizz [2012-04-26 14:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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KuroTsukiKun [2012-04-22 22:27:25 +0000 UTC]


There needs to be more...it's too short.
Great art, by the way!

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superfizz In reply to KuroTsukiKun [2012-04-22 22:48:32 +0000 UTC]

There might potentially be more

And thank you!

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sublimerotica [2012-04-22 11:40:10 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful piece.

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superfizz In reply to sublimerotica [2012-04-22 14:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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JUSTICEvsREALITY [2012-04-22 09:56:10 +0000 UTC]

*tears*

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superfizz In reply to JUSTICEvsREALITY [2012-04-22 14:06:52 +0000 UTC]

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JUSTICEvsREALITY In reply to superfizz [2012-04-23 00:41:52 +0000 UTC]

pretty much

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BitterFruit [2012-04-22 09:22:23 +0000 UTC]

I wanna see how teenage!John kicks SherlockΒ΄s fatherΒ΄s ass ! Royaly!

ItΒ΄s very nice, you two did a very good job and the drawing is just perfect, give the right atmosphere.

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superfizz In reply to BitterFruit [2012-04-22 14:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh thank you!

We're currently sort of in the works of another one, so hopefully there's more ^^

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BitterFruit In reply to superfizz [2012-04-22 16:12:39 +0000 UTC]

yaaaaaaay that made my day actually

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bluebelle-88 [2012-04-22 08:15:06 +0000 UTC]

Okay. Why do I feel so right now? Oh right, emotional attachment.

Great story to go with a nice piece of art.

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superfizz In reply to bluebelle-88 [2012-04-22 08:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Waahhh apologies for the emotions

Glad you like it, though

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bluebelle-88 In reply to superfizz [2012-04-22 08:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Emotional attachment is a good thing. I love my heart being pulled around by fan art and fics.

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superfizz In reply to bluebelle-88 [2012-04-22 08:30:46 +0000 UTC]

GAH ME TOO! Such an unhealthy addiction Q_Q

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bluebelle-88 In reply to superfizz [2012-04-22 09:29:40 +0000 UTC]

But it's better than emotional detachment.
I gave up trying to control it. Now I can freely enjoy amazing fics and art like yours.

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i-got-S-H-E-R-locked [2012-04-22 06:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Aawwwwwww

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superfizz In reply to i-got-S-H-E-R-locked [2012-04-22 06:25:07 +0000 UTC]

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i-got-S-H-E-R-locked In reply to superfizz [2012-04-22 06:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.

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iEpicWaffleZ [2012-04-21 21:47:59 +0000 UTC]

Ubububuuu ~ Sherlock!!

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superfizz In reply to iEpicWaffleZ [2012-04-22 00:55:51 +0000 UTC]

WAAAHHHH D:

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Rubicon-art In reply to superfizz [2012-04-22 02:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Bawwww

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Lillkin [2012-04-21 21:00:08 +0000 UTC]

ah this was awesome! the piece of writing and the drawing match perfectly and the combined force of it made me almost sqee with fangirlish delight do you perhaps consider expanding on this? pretty please?

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superfizz In reply to Lillkin [2012-04-22 00:55:03 +0000 UTC]

Expanding? Perhaps

And thank you so much! So glad you like it!

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Rubicon-art In reply to superfizz [2012-04-22 02:05:50 +0000 UTC]

We could do that... if you wanted... I'd be up for it...

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superfizz In reply to Rubicon-art [2012-04-22 06:25:51 +0000 UTC]

I'd be delighted

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Rubicon-art In reply to superfizz [2012-04-22 06:26:46 +0000 UTC]

You online now?

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superfizz In reply to Rubicon-art [2012-04-22 06:30:09 +0000 UTC]

YUS.

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Emobella101 [2012-04-21 20:24:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thats was amazing, your art is amazing ALL AMAZING. I wish I'd get some one on Omegle that'd do this with me. All I get when I try to Sherlock roleplay is people saying "Balls" and disconnecting Ah well anyway that was awesome, I'm horible and have a pain fetish. DON'T JUDGE ME!

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superfizz In reply to Emobella101 [2012-04-22 00:54:07 +0000 UTC]

There are some.... interesting people on omegle.. and yes, like ~Lemonade4Jessa said, narrow down your interests to avoid the dickheads saying 'tits or gtfo' ..... okay I just pictured Sherlock saying that... yep.. cool... what?

And glad you like it! Thank you!

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