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veronicalioncharacte In reply to SuperSmurgger [2020-06-18 16:12:11 +0000 UTC]
Well origins story tells abouth my oc named Veronica.
She is the queen of the alpha kingdom
After she lost his family at young age...
In the future she has 13 sons and 8 daugthers...
One of his sons Nobitas is stolen from the alpha kingdom to Japan
In that place Nobita suffers Bully from his friends except Shizuka and Dekigusu this two are his best friends before he meets Doraemon
After he meets Doraemon with his great greart grandson Sewashi.....
The two have so much fun to going every adventure they had wit his friends
But one they Doraemon tells him the truth abouth his origins
Doraemon tells Nobita that he was a royal son from the royal family alpha.
And his true parents are the king Kenny and the queen Verónica from the alpha kingdom
Doraemon and Nobita goes on adventure to get back to his true home....
In the story will be more characters
Apart of Doraemon characters......
I going to do the first chapter....
But the characters they will be a disney ducks from the show Ducktales 2017....
Yes the story is a world but ruler by animals....
I hope do you like my story and also i am going to made fanarts abouth the chapters.....
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sampea [2019-08-23 22:27:11 +0000 UTC]
Dang. I'm stunned...
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Reviewer2016 [2018-05-26 01:38:13 +0000 UTC]
1-what only adds to the punch I when in the show it turned out she was a lot like Nobi when she was his age.
2-this is what would happen if the show was more realistic, granted yes it's about a boys misadventures with a cat robot from the future, but still if Nobi wasn't as cheerful he would begin to question his self worth with (as best to my knowledge) the moments his mom looks down on him out weigh the moments of her being a mom.
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SuperSmurgger In reply to Reviewer2016 [2018-05-26 09:16:17 +0000 UTC]
I actually wish it was realistic, as you said. This series is good, but it keeps turning around in circles without evolving. The same recycled episodes over and over again.
They really should have this kind of scene happen more often, if you ask me !
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sampea In reply to SuperSmurgger [2019-08-23 22:27:39 +0000 UTC]
I've heard of a movie in which Nobita is a grown-up.
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SuperSmurgger In reply to sampea [2019-08-31 10:55:46 +0000 UTC]
"Stand By Me Doraemon", maybe ? It's adapted from some episode from the TV show.
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Severusiana [2018-01-02 20:01:33 +0000 UTC]
So emotional, very well written.
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MissNickyX In reply to SuperSmurgger [2016-11-18 16:47:01 +0000 UTC]
Yes... and it's a beautiful drawing too..
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MirabelleLeaf31 [2015-12-07 06:40:22 +0000 UTC]
I faved this drawing long ago, but I just read the story just now.. It's so sad, but touching at the end. ;-;
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RDC10 [2015-02-16 09:57:01 +0000 UTC]
Great!!!! XD Love it!!
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spongefox [2014-11-10 07:53:01 +0000 UTC]
I can see some grammatical errors in this piece,but I'll let it slide.
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spongefox In reply to SuperSmurgger [2014-11-11 16:28:44 +0000 UTC]
It has quite a lot of errors. Such as sentences that have stuff missing, or isn't correct at all. I didn't want to point them out,cause I felt it would upset you if I did.
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spongefox In reply to SuperSmurgger [2014-11-11 18:08:02 +0000 UTC]
Right. Well, there are a lot of grammatical errors in the story. Might want to slowly go through one paragraph at a time,to find them.
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spongefox [2014-11-10 05:41:44 +0000 UTC]
This will sound harsh coming from me, but I think to add a bit more intense moments to the story, if Nobi slapped his mom for being so harsh and angry with him. I know that's really cruel, but from what I've read on the web, you should never really get angry at a child. I don't mean not getting angry, but actually yelling and physically hurting them. They can pick up that behavior and either use it against the adult, other family members or friends. OR, it could affect their mental health. Make them distant and depressed.
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SuperSmurgger In reply to spongefox [2014-11-10 06:35:21 +0000 UTC]
I know what you mean, and I totally agree with you. But on the other hand, I don't think Nobita is the kind of kid who would act like this. He is very sensitive and I think he really loves his mother and friends, so much that he feels terribly guilty everyone he fails, but he never shows it. That's the reason why he is always acting like a naughty boy, because he needs attention and more love. And if his mother finaly realizes that he needs it, and does give him this love, I don't think Nobita would "welcome" her with a slap...
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spongefox In reply to SuperSmurgger [2014-11-10 07:51:57 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure he has a breaking point. Even the a rose has thorns. There should come a day where he snaps back a both his mom and Doraemon,and see how they like it.
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SuperSmurgger In reply to spongefox [2014-11-11 15:41:13 +0000 UTC]
You forgot Gian and Sune and Sensei too ! But I think the best way to snap back...is to make them understand they were wrong !
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BluePurpleBadger [2014-10-22 19:06:57 +0000 UTC]
Look at the bottom left near the right end of his closet on the floor.
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